I like it. Poetic.

...I don't understand how this barely has any comments.

It's beautiful in a crude and horrible and twisted but utterly fascinating way. The language was plain and the words were well chosen. My favourite line is this one:

Just a moment before, Twilight Town’s sky was as red as blood and guts splattered across a canvas.

WOW. Very vivid imagery. And the way you let the story end, and the progress of it... it's so fitting. You can feel Axel's anger and hurt and -hate, if you will, but you can also feel the love and tenderness. It's very well balanced, even though the rape-part is really intense. But the single line about 'the man kissed him, deeply' all made up for it, and since you didn't use gratuitous language it was more powerful.

I am really astonished and in awe. Thank you for writing this, it's beautiful. And thank you for the characterization, especially Axel's. He was very wonderful.

(And Roxas' line 'I've got money. Please.' tore me apart a little, because you totally see what an innocent, plain boy he is in the fake TWT.)

LOVELY.

I love the writing style u used like in the part

Roxas was thinking that

even being

torn up

can be

infinitely

sweet…

that got me really into the fic

wow...that was...that was something if anything(lol) It was alright but really dark and did send shivers down my spine.

Well. Once again I'm too late to write an at least decent review but whatever.

The story was good ] Especially towards the middle and end. I loved the emotions conveyed behind words. And although some of the sex sequences were confusing you made up for it in the end.

Lovely story.