I love the olden english you had placed in this fiction.

Here I will make a breakdown of this chapter.

Story 10: Oh come on, its Titanic! Just the idea of it makes it a 10.

Characters 10: Personalities fit perfectly, and I look forwards to more.

English 9: The flow of language was superb, but I had to stop once in a while to re-read a sentence since it sounds really abnormal (yet it makes sense, just takes me time to understand)

Plot 8: I don't see an ourlining of a plot, however, I do sense a fantasic plot being planned

Notes: Miriella I believe is the spelling.

Update soon!

(ZNO)

nice so far...but why can't yzak have shiho? even as a tiny tiny tiny little side? it just wouldn't be fair to him:(

update soon okay?

Nice, relly, really nice :) Update soon, pretty please :* (btw, AthrunLeo...? No...! xD).