This was a pleasureable story.

I liked this a lot.

write another

Very well written. I love stories from a digimon's point of view, and you kept Renamon and Ruki in character, too. Nice.

i thought it was a pretty good story, but you had alot of spelling errors

Sweet and sad, but with lots of hope at the end (saved it from being completely angst). It was cute seeing Renamon's jealousy at Takato. I only hope 1 day Ruki will tell Renamon how she feels...

It was very well written for something done during school, I must say. But on a whiny note, you put this in the RANAMON section instead of the RENAMON section. And I don't like Ranamon- she's the evil, annoying water digimon from Digimon Frontier with this fake Southern accent. Yecch! But there's a 1-letter difference between the names, so it's easy to get them mixed up.

I really must say, though, that aside from my fangirl overpickyness, this was really cool. I always wanted to make a Ruki/Renamon fic, but alas my writing is crappy. You are my hero! -

This was actually quite good, much to my own shock. Some others on a different site were... disterbing. Anyway, this would make an exelent story if you continued it onward, as is now, but it would be more... enjoyable. Thank you for posting.

I thoroughly enjoyed this story, but please do a part2 in which Ruki&Renamon become a couple!

aww that was cute i loved it tons

This is weird, but cool. I like it.

do a part two please. Will you also please write me an E-mail when you have finished it, Review my fic and tell me what you think. Keep in touch.

Normally I don't like slash. In fact, I don't like it at all. I noticed the title, and figured that "Awaiting your command, koi" was the Japanese dialogue for when she said "As you wish" in the parking garage, and I read it to soak up a little more Japanese dialogue to satisfy my curiosity about how things originally went. But I was pleasantly surprised when I found this. Renamon is a very interesting character and it's good to see something from her point of view. Her grace and style are shown in this story, and are even better with the mind behind it. Some attack names were wrong (Nightmare SuckNightmare Shock, Fox Glove ArrowwoodFox Leaf Arrowhead) and Vilemon's a Champion, but those were forgivable. You have great talent.

Really nice fic! I love Renamon and Ruki as a couple. This was a really well writtin and sweet story, keep up the great work!

Bravo! A triumph of writing. It could have used a little cleaning up, but that's just cosmetic stuff. It was still damned good. Makes me sniffle just thinking about it _ Keep writing high quality stuff :)

Cute. Very cute. I loved it.