What an interesting plot so far. I like the way you write it and the way you portray the characters. Can't wait for an update! :D

aww, poor Light. but I always thought that he would be a better character if he showed some compassion. I liked Misa when she was all serious and goth-y, but I also liked her when she was all bubbly. I am in love with this fanfic. seriously. please don't quit halfway through or something. I hate it when that happens, don't you?

You're good. Oh, you're good. This story is incredibly well written, not to mention well paced and believable. The characters are spot on. I'm so disappointed that there isn't more, and I really hope this story hasn't been abandoned. Anyway thanks for uploading what you have, it's been a terrific read so far.

Oh! I know I'm going to like this story. So far everyone is in character and it's beautiful, just like reading something out of the mange or watching something from the anime. :)

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I am absolutely in love with this story. I hate all those stories where the whole plot centres on 'Light has been given a second chance to do GOD,' because, c'mon. Going back and undoing his hard evil work? That ain't Light, no sir.

YOUR fic, on the other hand, is exactly what I have been searching for ever since I finished the series. It's perfect, is what it is. I notice you haven't updated in almost a year now- please, don't tell me that means it's gonna be unfinished forever. D8 I simply have to know how this turns out, as I'm sure many of your readers do.

Feed us! Give us more believable plot and evil Light and sweet, loyal Matsuda and Misa and Mikami and Ryuk, hell, I'll even be sad about the lack of well-written Near if you don't finish this.

With that being said, Bad Nut out!

epic.

This is the best ever oh my god but AUGH this last chapter came out a year ago are you going to finish it some day?

Awesome and here i was JUST about to write a "how it should have ended" where Light bribes Ryuk with an entire orchard of apples to kill the SPK.

Hey uh you gonna update? Considering that this is post-series, and no one's extremely ooc I'd hate to see it die.

Still you get praise for what you did.

I really really love this. It's amazing. I love how you used the eraser from the pilot episode in such a clever fashion. It's very well-written and I couldn't stop.

hehe very good fic =)

Haha! God, I love your story! It's incredibly funny!

aww!! i love this fanfic, its my favourite death note one by far! i hope you update soon, you have such a wonderful plot going and you haven't made the characters seem OCC like others seem to do. I cant wait to read the next chapter, na no da! :)

OMG you MUST update soon! I love what you're doing with the characters, especially Ryuk. You're making him do something he'd probably never do in reality, but you're managing to keep his character perfectly! Very smooth with those loopholes.

Keep it up!

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Brilliant! Just found this fic now, and I absolutely love it. Ryuk is just priceless :D

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