LAWL, AWESOME. I couldn't believe it when KH2 didn't give any hint as to what happened to Traverse Town. And the moogles! Did they immigrate to Hollow Bastion, too? :(

I like how you've included her backstory while still staying in the current timeframe. That is to say, it's not lame!flashbacky and it's nicely integrated. x3;

And I LOVE this line!!

"a jewel-bright sky shining down on subtly shifting hills."

Gorgeous ♥ Subtly and shifting sound so pretty together!

I'm not sure who the guy is, though. o__o; OC, or was there a hint to a canon character that I must have missed... ?

Anyway, anyway. :D I like it~~

And I love the title. Sunswept! Pretty~!

Lawl. Kay. Submitting. ♥

Hey, I thought it was really good. Not many people talk about the stuff behind the scenes, ne? Keep up the good work!
-V.V.