do update ^-^

WOW, talk about a turn of events!

I loved this new plot development... really, I never saw this coming, what a wonderful idea XD. Now everything will change... I can't wait to find out what happens next!

Also, the train ride was good, including Quistis' point of view. It really adds up. And Zell really couldn't resist making that comment, huh ;P

I'll be waiting for more!! Though, take your time, don't rush it and let it flow smoothly from your mind onto digital paper... just dont take TOO long ;P

Read ya later
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Well, it's good to know what Quistis thinks of the situation ... Lolz, I just hope the unfortunate people don't have to meet Fujin and Raijin again! XD

Update soon, please! :D

Ash XX

Whew, I'm glad that Seifer didn't join with the Sorceress and I don't blame Suiko for clutching on to him! XD

i want more! wah. seifer is sexy tho. lol

At first I thought, "Mary Sue!" and thus didn't expect too much from this fic. But oddly this fic is delicious, wonderfully written and a delight to read. The characters are a slight bit weak but the plotline...WOW. incredible. I love the way you're building upon it. Excellent descriptions...you won't believe how much I love this fic right now. Do update soon!

Wow ... I wish Seiko 'Good Luck' with manipulating Seifer and winning his heart. :D

Although, he's far too stubborn for his own good, lolz. ::)

Can't wait for the next chapter (And the ball!) XD

Ash XX

P.S. Writer's Block should go away soon. So, just wait for a while. :)

ohh... interesting. Hope 2 see more!

Well, here's the explanation on why the Iceberg would take someone to the ball :D

Great chapter! I loved the retrospective scene and how everything settled in place with the plot you're developing :D

Wow!

O.O Definitely didn't see that coming! Squall asking her to the ball was completely unexpected... And 6 thousand gil?! I guess he was right that was more than enough cash, wasn't it? I mean, you can buy a tent for 10 gil, more or less. Guess a fancy dress wouldn't be that far :D

jejeje Suiko the Matchmaker! Beware world! XD I really hope she succeeded though, for Zell's sake.

Lulu's outfit is great! I really like her dark, sexy style. I guess if the sisters manage to pull it off, Suiko would definitely impress Seifer ;D

Hi!

Sorry for the late reviews... I know, I'm horrible. But it's better late than never, right? Right?

Anyway,I loved the first part of this chap. The chat between Seifer, Squall and Zell was hilarious :D Nice done.

Uh-oh.. seems someone is in trouble... I wouldn't like to be in Suiko's shoes right now, with they believing her dangerous and all.

let's see how you develop this!

See ya in a bit!

I must say this is good ^^
and the person who bitched about her being a Mary-Sue GTFO and re-read the definition of Mary-Sue...
I am a huge fan of Seifer myself and I would seriously do the same thing... ** him off until he ACTUALLY listens.
I hope to see more of this soon ^^

I'm anxious to see what happens next, the story has me on the edge of my seat. Will she be able to save Seifer from the evil sorceress? Seifer's stubborn, eh? Hopefully she'll be able to knock some kind of sense into his handsome head.

I shall be awaiting your next update.

Hey, your Mary Sue is showing.

Better fix that.

I am so glad you accept anonymous reviews. I am watching your story closely and I like it so far. Please continue, I have same feelings for Seifer and that's why I really understand what you are trying to express with this story. I sincerely wish you luck.
P.S. Forgive my grammar, English is not my native language.