That was great! But, I feel so bad that Cedric and Hermione broke up.

Amazing story, although I do feel a tad bit sorry for Cedric. You should really consider making this story longer.

oh, know what?
if you wanted to make this all angsty you could write up a follow up on hermione after he dies after the thrid task.


and then i'd hope shed feel terrible and cry all over herself because she'd been a terrible mean person by leading him on like that.
hmpf.

haha. i sound angry, and i am, not at you though, just your hermione :]

I love this story...

so sad! post more!