Reviews for Hanging By A Moment

Reviews For: Hanging By A Moment

Mma63 2008-06-02 ch 8,	abuseWhere to start? You know I've faced your fic long time ago and it never left my mind. For long time (more than 20 months to be more precisely) I was looking for the story and finally you reposted it. As you said it really worth. It took some time for review cause English is not my native language and confess got lost sometimes because the length and elaborate style in each chapter and had to re-read some parts to better understand the trama. I got completely involved in the first time I've read and the feeling is the same now. Probably one of the most difficult but rich and disturbing fics I've read along this years in Fanfiction. The intensity and pain of every emotion and scene described through the eyes of each character is something hard to forget. In you first post didn't have this unwelcome but somehow feared cliffhanger - I figured Nick's life was at risk once they connected the third person to Vegas. I could keep talking about every chapter and moment for pages and pages but think here is not the right place. Point is: Are you really going to update the story? I noticed there's no much reviews but I think if you post one chapter at time readers well have more time to enjoy your work. This work is for those who are willing fore a major emotional angst. Don't need to say I'm your fan. So be determinate and don't give up. I'm looking forward to more once you shattered my heart with the last part of it.
Mma63 2008-05-30 ch 2,	abuseIt was a very longer chapter but it worth every single word. One of the most beautiful Nick/Sara moments I've ever read, the emotions and feelings transcended the monitor screen. Now we're aware of what transpired between Nick and his father and how he felt about it. The feeling of impotence and loss the team, specially Grissom's showed were deep and stronger. His realization of having Nick like a son hit him hard. Tomorrow I'll take the next chapter, but be sure this one won't leave my thoughts.
spottedhorse 2008-05-26 ch 2,	abuseYou've got a great story here but you need to run a grammar checker or get a beta. You characterizations are on target and your descriptive use of language is fantastic. But your verb tenses need attention. I'm reading though...great story!
Mma63 2008-05-26 ch 1,	abuseGod, I can't believe you decided to repost this amazing story! Since the first time I got my eyes on it got completely absorbed into the deepness of the characters and the drama itself. Funny thing is that a couple weeks ago I tried so hard find it again but without result. unnecessary say that I'm pretty excited to see you back. Thank you for that. Keep it coming!
keltikswife 2007-10-02 ch 8,	abusewill there be more ? very interesting, a little dificult to read but interesting.. JH

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