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| Whirlwind421 2007-11-17 ch 1,  | abuseGreat story! I love it!! |
| Charmed225 2007-11-14 ch 1, | abuseLove it! Great great great...was giggling all the way through!! |
| nebbyJen 2007-10-01 ch 1, | abuseWhat a great short piece! Loved Ronon taking the food from Sheppard. It was great how Rodney could put up with John's memory loss. LOL... that was fun. |
| Meirelle 2007-09-30 ch 1, | abuseI loved it! Poor McKay. He's obviously made the machine much worse. |
| Zedpm 2007-09-30 ch 1, anon. | abuseYes, please do as 1337stargatefan says. It's very irksome to go from one scene to another without some kind of warning that there is going to be a scene change. Story's interesting though. Would like to see you right Rodney's story. |
| macisgate 2007-09-30 ch 1, | abuseVery funny! Great stuff. |
| 1337StargateFan 2007-09-30 ch 1, | abuseReally good, you have to write one for McKay! My only suggestion is that you put a bar or something between scene jumps, I got confused since they all ran together. |
| Obsessed Pam 2007-09-30 ch 1, | abuseSo cleverly done and highly entertaining too. A great read. |
| gluegirl56 2007-09-30 ch 1, anon. | abuseI liked this one. I can see them before me. Please write one about McKay too...You can't leave it like that : ) |