Excelent story, first Farscape and to have written it at work, that couldn't have been easy. I really like it hope you do more.

Well written dialogue, well planned storyline, believable character development, original storyline. An excellent job, and I hope to read more from you soon.

MikeJo

That was an AMAZING ending! I loved the whole story, just read it from start to finish. Excellent premise. That is one smart kid Aeryn has, she saved the planet so she can have chocolate! LOL!

Thanks! That was a great read!

Loved it. It was different and interesting - once again to see how the universe was frelling with John and Aeryn, and partly to see where you would take the story.
Well written plenty of emotion and the chance to see into their heads as they went along.

The only other comment I have, and this a completely subjective point of view, is it seemed a little rushed in parts, a little too condensed. The end seemed a little too pat but that again is only my personal view, and to be taken with a grain of salt (or two) :). Plus I think it would have been interesting, if you could have kept the tension of would they won't they arrive, to have shown something about what was going on with Moya and co.

Cheers Valoki

Great story. It's one of the best alternative universe fics I've read.

I like this, something different, but it works. Looking foreward to tomorrow