Very good. I am deeply impressed.

Beautiful piece of work.

Tip of the hat.

Bravo!

The Last samurai is my favorite movie of all time, and you did a very nice job capturing it in this piece. It was strait forward and true to the story, while stilling giving a different voice an perspective. it seems though that you had a bit of trouble finding rhyming words. That's ok, just keep writing and rhymes will flow like crazy. You've got some talent, be sure to keep on keepin' on dude/dudette, Peace

a powerful movie placed into a powerful poem