aw, that's so cute!

I love it so much! Please keep up the good work.

You do fluff so well :o)

It's so sweet!

I love Maiko fanfics! Oh so fluffy! I forgot to buy a lifejacket... I drowned in your words!

AW!
Glad I wore my life-jacket. ^_^

OMG!I totally agree, they are a cute pairing! I thought the story was awesome. You were right, a lot of fluff! I LOVE FLUFF!

Aw...that was so sweet!...i loved our story!

I loved it! It was absolutely beautiful!

OMG! THAT IS THE MOST BEAUTIFUL STORY I EVER HEARD GREAT JOB!

Have a Cupcake;)

Such a cute little one shot. You did a great job with this, the perfect amount of Maiko and everything! Also, a cute concept and a sweet ending. Fantastic job!
~December'sRose

Nicely written! Love it! Please write more!!

*chokes* Darn, I thought I was a strong enough swimmer to make it. LOL. AW... ITS SO CUTE I ALMOST DIED. lol.

Very cute, and fluffy, (Hey, if it can drown me, its gotta be pretty darn fluffy) I loved it!

Really cute, and I in no way mean that condescendingly. I really like the idea of Zuko being able to create and control fire "creatures", which really worked with the background of bending displays. Gotta love the Maikoness. Good Job.

silly quinny! it's maizu, not zumai or maiko. tho maybe u should call it zumai. hey, live on the edge. it IS kinda fun to say. but anyway.
i do love fluff. especially maizu fluff. nice job on this, but please duble check spelling and grammar before you post it. i've only written one, but i read it like five times before i posted it. uh oh. i used like, but not as a preposition. my english teacher would be so mad at me.

They are so... perfect for each other! lol. I love these two because they're so different from what people expect them to be. Especially Mai, she's great. Well, good fic!