Oh holy shit on a barbecue stick.

You have cracked open Wuya's mind and story and shown it to the world. You have also unraveled a lot about the hidden potential in Jack. I really do feel that he is one of the best trickster characters in the making.

Very nice! I've only recently been rewatching this series - in order this time - and I have to admit to really enjoying the Jack/Wuya dynamic as well...

A well written story that I enjoyed from end to end. Well done!

Brilliant.
Simply BRILLIANT.

wow...i think we have similar thoughts haha about the detectobot, jacks perspective on the shen gong wu and even the way his mind works i totally agree with. great minds think alike :)

xx

this is great.
you know i never thought about the detecto-bot before this, your right jack must've unraveled some of wuya's magic to make that work.
it's so cool that you noticed that. i bow to you.

me love!! you definately caught the characters, especially jack. its fab! ^^

I like it... Especially the idea of Jack being a tyrent, a threat to Wuya, and her leaving him... Or is he a threat to Chase? Very nice. Wuya's thought process throughout makes sense, and it's in-character.

This didn't seem to be much of a Jack/Wuya but I loved the encounter between them. Its was kinda... suspenceful.

XD
AWESOME ON A STICK.

Hmm. Very interesting expansion of Jack and Wuya's relationship. I really like some of the places you took this. Jack's understanding of magic? Wuya's realization of the threat he could become? Most people only scratch the surface of this relationship, leaving it on the shallower end of mere bickering and trifle disagreement between the two, but you certainly seem to have been very glad to dive right in to things and take a good deep look around. Very nice.

I also love your writing style and quality. Great work.

-Alori

Loved the story! I hope you write more in this plot. You never did say what Jack had on the 'table'.

The meaning for witch was inserted and used very well, I'm looking it up now. I was very impressed with Wuya's views on Jack, particularly on their relationship and his lack of real fear of Wuya or rather having any deference to her. I can't even nitpick this because it fit together so perfectly.

I think I should thank you in advance because I have a story upcoming with Jack and Wuya and Potential really put their relationship in context; I always got the mother-son context, but this went beyond that. In short, a great story.

This was awesome, i love jack/wuya but sadly theres not enough can you pls turn this into a full fic? would be awesome that way

Wow. This was excellent. Very descriptive, and I loved the insight into Jack and Wuya's relationship. Their dialogue, however brief, was awesome. The end interested me with Wuya exploring Jack's possible futures, and I found it funny how she just left him there.

Well done. It shows that you worked extremely hard on this, and although it's unlikely you'll continue, I really hope you do in some way. Because that cliffhanger was just plain nasty. =D

Interesting, very interesting.