 Scabbers1957 2009-11-13 . chapter 1Now this is a story that should have more than one chapter...thoughts on that??
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 Sunshine and Chocolate 2009-10-17 . chapter 1Wow that was really good! I really enjoyed reading it! |
 miktlynk 2009-07-16 . chapter 1i really love this story. i've always hoped this would happen between the two and the way you did it was absolutely perfect in my eyes, very subtle and sweet. |
 CrayonsPink 2009-04-12 . chapter 1Great job! I'm glad that you asked me to read it! |
 YeOldBard 2008-11-24 . chapter 1I liked this story a lot I like the way you made harry and Luna older, maybe add a bit af luna's quirkyness otherwise more more more. |
 Lain Lang 2008-11-18 . chapter 1hey! I saw your message... thanks for sending me your story!
It's good! Just (I think you're looking for some kind of review of the content...) a little... don't know... OOC?
Your writing is good, also the right pace... just need a little more emotion in the story...
well, I'm no expert, so feel free to ignore my comments!
thanks for the fic! |
 oOoJadedoOo 2008-09-21 . chapter 1ahh how I love Harry/Luna great job |
 Zatcher 2008-07-25 . chapter 1I thought this story was good. I'm not as ecstatic about it as I am about some of your other stories, but it has quite a lot of defending points.
Even though I loved the books, I'll never understand why JK made Harry and Ginny end up together. Luna was so obviously the one that was best at cheering him up, she was the only one he could talk to about things he refused to discuss with anyone else, and I don't think anything ever made him laugh as much as "a combination of dark magic and gum disease" did. (I always thought Harry/Ginny happened more out of lust than anything, whilst Harry/Luna would have had some actual roots to build on.)
As far as I could tell, with this story you hit all the reasons why Harry and Luna should have been together in the end, why they were just so right for one another, and that's exactly what pushes it to the top as far as I'm concerned. 2-thumbs up.
P.S.: I don't know why, but I get the feeling "tigress" could probably be a very plausible description. xD |
 NotaPunk 2008-07-17 . chapter 1That was great. And Luna is always there for Harry. |
 Adoringly 2008-06-24 . chapter 1Go Luna and Harry!!
its nice to see some fanfiction about them :] |
 FluffyNevyn 2008-04-20 . chapter 1a bit simple...but profound. You never gave a good handle on the time frame involved. At first, for all I knew, you were talking end of fifth year. Then it explained more later in the chapter that we were looking at post DH. May want to move some things around to establish setting sooner. Other than that...Decent. I would give it a B+ |
 moonpower02 2008-02-27 . chapter 1That was a great story. I wish it was longer but any why. I really like the way that you showed Harry thinking about Luna while she sleep next to him. keep up the great work. Make a new one soon! ^^ |
 Willow-Bee the Cat 2008-02-07 . chapter 1I like it. Thanks for the recomendation. Sorry it took me so long to get around to reading this. I've been pretty busy with schoolwork. |
 Madgetown 2008-01-13 . chapter 1Aw sweet. She really is the only one who understands him. |
 selenepotter 2008-01-09 . chapter 1More! |