Awesome story, but personally, I can't picture Tobi being THAT serious and doing that. In my point of view, it should've been Deidara doing it. XD But that's just me. Good job though!

hehe,loved it~

very nice. o.o I really liked this. Normally I never read this pairing, but I really liked this. -dances around-

amazing... doesnt even begin to describe it

-Sabaku no Bri

The best TobiDei fic ever!! XD (I really loved it b/c I hate DeiTobi, and I love evil!Tobi). XD

oh my..
I like this, i like it a lot ^^

O.O I loved it!

For the love of all things pink eyed and topless, please continue this! Or not. I think you just turned me on to TobiDei! Very well done, hot but more evil than hot, if that makes sense?

~Jen

YAY! another miku fan!btw, this was amazing, i seriously cant wait for the next chapter!

i need a fan and a cold glass of water w/ ice thi story is amazing and Mitukashi's art is really inspiring

This was good, but I miss the sweet moments they shared. Still awesome fic though. XD

I wish you would continue this, but it is awesome as is.

I can see Tobi looking for a way to make Deidara the same way he is.

OHMIGOSH. :D SO HOT. AND AWESOME. AND HOT AND AWESOME. SRSLY. ISN'T MIKUTASHI'S ART INPSPIRING? XD

This fic is like...Wonderful. :3 Awesome job.

Awesome job...love Evil!Tobi.

Thanks for posting!

O: SMUT!