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| Singing Dancing Chef 2008-02-22 ch 3,  | abuseOK u got me it was ok i gues i will read when u up-date sigh |
| ML7 2007-10-04 ch 3, | abuseHi there, this is pretty interesting. I'm glad that Katara is oaky and that everything went smoothly. Anyway keep up the good work and see you later! |
| ML7 2007-10-04 ch 2, | abuseHi there, sorry I didn't review these latest chapters. I was busy with school. I hope Katara will be okay and that Zuko gets along with her. Anyway keep up the good work and see you later! |
| Zakuro Haruno 2007-10-02 ch 3, | abuseNice, very nice! I'll have to check out the other Zuko story. Sadly, I know nothing about Kingdom Hearts... =^.^= |
| pinky101 2007-10-02 ch 3, | abusecool story so far |
| basketball whiz 2007-10-02 ch 3, | abuseWow, just a little advie. way to fast, needs more deatils and longer chapters! |
| Flipflopper333 2007-10-02 ch 3, | abusei luv post more soon!! |
| Alina Alone 2007-10-02 ch 3, | abuseAlinaAlone#1 here. hahaha. i can totally see Iroh saying that! great chapters! keep writing! |
| StrgateAtlantis1 2007-10-01 ch 3, | abuseMore! And maybe you could make the chapters longer, cause these short ones are KILLING ME! LOL |
| vampgirl725 2007-10-01 ch 3, | abuseI like the story but could you try to mke the chapters longer |
| Loveless Minji-chan 2007-10-01 ch 3, | abuseYou captured the characters perfectly!I can't wait to see what's next! |
| StrgateAtlantis1 2007-10-01 ch 2, | abuseshort leaves more suspense! No! U evil! LOL jk Update! (as soon as you get the chance!) :) |
| StrgateAtlantis1 2007-10-01 ch 1, | abuseKEEP GOING! PLEASE! |
| Infinite101 2007-10-01 ch 1, | abuseGreat start, can't wait to read the rest :) |
| Silent Kunoichi aka. Fiona 2007-09-30 ch 1, | abusePAMS(Please add more soon) |