Hate it? no its great! i love it!!

I love the two guards!!:) Also you did a great job of mixing humor with romance and tradity. I hope that you write more!! Tahnks for making me laugh!!:)

You have great One-Liners! Keep up the jokes!

OH WOW! HOW DID YOU COME UP WITH THAT! IT'S GREAT!

YEY! Great story, I absolutely loved it, thank you :D

great story. great ending, even if it did take them a long time to get there. i like your style of writing. well-done.

I loved your story not this chapter though. On par with Kristen Britain herself! Just a query though, the bracelets Karigan wore were handcuffs/ chains weren't they?

Wonderful story!

yup he is nummy, and i have to admit that i'm rather partial to Eiddoel. glad you added this alternate ending.

Mae carnen again, friend. Very good. I enjoyed both endings. Very much so, Morelwen. (Lady of the Dark Star in Elvish) Very much indeed.

CT

Mae carnen! I lin na ped Peregrin, i Ernil i Pheriannath, i Ecthellionion.

If you do not know, I just basically said "well done" and commented on the origins of the song's verse in the movies. In the books, the line is sang by Frodo in the Fellowship of the Ring after they leave the shire, soon before they meet the Black Rider and before they reach Bree.

Yes, I am quite a Lord of the Rings enthusiast... well, someone who knows Elvish and speaks it more than English is a bit mroe than an enthusast... however, the story is very good.

I am finding myself almost wishing that this was not going to be a Karigan/Zachary piece, but that Princess Karigan Galadhon-Ari-Matiel remained with the Prince of the Eletians. I know, that's a bit over the top, but you have certainly written a good piece here. Very good, and I applaud you. Without the Mornhavonian sarcasm.

CT

Oh WOW you finished it, and it is EXCELLENT! Fastion and Somial at the door... lets just say it is a good thing i was not drinking anything when i read that. I have to say i enjoyed both endings whole heartedly ( although for very different reasons) and i utterly refuse to decide between them ;-)

Gray

Nice to see this story finished, I enjoyed reading it - and some nice ideas in the last chapter - Estora as Rider :) - and finally Karigan and Zachary together :)

:'( No!! I don't want it to end!!

Happy K/Z ending... drool...The first one so far!

YAY! You updated! *tackle-hugs* Great work with the story, and I read both versions of the end...I cried when I read the second one. Hopefully you will write a great many more awesome and moving stories like this one.