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Reviews for: Broken Down
Aner Keram
2004-07-30 . chapter 1
wow... yeah, i tryed to forget the ending to that season, it was so dissapointing. And this one, even though it's so sad, it leaves room for the start of something great! *hint* Of course, only if you want. >:P Great fic, feel sorry for the little kid though. ;_; so sad... so true...

Keep up the great work! ^_9
Cu Sith
2002-05-16 . chapter 1
*Cries* Poor Jyou!
Demon King Piccolo
2001-11-24 . chapter 1
Where in the world could a person find information on another person's personal life legally?And even if Jyou's wife ask all of his friends,I don't think that his friends would give out persoal information without his permission.This fic is kind of strange,and dark,but it was good.
Rachel Lynn (too lazy to sign in)
2001-08-29 . chapter 1
Poor, poor Jyou! What a heartbreaking thing to write, but it was written really well! Great fic! (Doesn't hurt that it's a Matchbox 20 songfic, I ~love~ Matchbox 20, and that song fit particularly well to the situation you wrote. Poor Kido, sometimes things just don't have a happy ending.) Excellent fic!
Evil Penguin
2001-08-28 . chapter 1
the ending disturbed us too!!!!!!!(who didn't it?)
Ree
2001-08-26 . chapter 1
I love that! Whoa, whoa, I love it! Rest Stop IS a damn good song, my favorite from "Mad Season." So sad...I love this.
musouka
2001-08-25 . chapter 1
For some odd reason, I thought of Hanako (my version of Jyou's wife after 02, from "Usotsuki") as I read this. I don't think she'd ever go this far, but much of the sentiment is the same...but different, and I honestly loved your interpretation. Djinn-saaaan! You're such a wonderful writer!! It was deliciously dark and utterly depressing, rather like the ending itself, well to the fans of the show at least. ::sniff:: Poor poor Jyou...I'd love to see what Yama is doing now/how he feels. Doesn't bitterness make a wonderful muse?
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