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| Mondlerlove 2008-06-13 ch 3,  | abuseThe first two chapters were really good but then you completely switched focus on to Ross and Rachel, and there was only 2 lines about Monica and Chandler... Are you developing any other chapters to this? |
| GossipGirl17 2008-05-22 ch 3, | abuseVery cute, I loved it. |
| saik 2008-04-28 ch 3, anon. | abuseaw cuteness. but u need more mondler hahhaha. =] plz continue soon |
| Exintaris 2008-04-28 ch 3, | abuseAw ... Actually, Ross was with Rachel for one year, and they broke up on their anniversary. Then they got together at/after the beach house, for about two days. And then there were all the complications after his marriage, when she told him she was still in love with him but then said to forget it - you might have built on that, though the show writers didn't. |
| KyliedaRock 2007-11-08 ch 2, | abusethis is really good and extremly cute! Me likey! ^^ |
| like2CUhappy24-7 2007-11-05 ch 2, | abuseomg its awesome im so happy i found a good mondler fic! kep up the good work and update asap! |
| DrKerryWeaver 2007-11-05 ch 2, | abuseAww so sweet I loved it! |
| SqutternutBosh 2007-11-05 ch 2, | abuseIt's always interesting to see a new take on something done on the show, particularly something that has been well-written. I'm interested in where you are taking this. I liked how you characterised Monica's obsession with cleanliness, it made me smile :) Good job. |
| Drama Queen Johnson 2007-11-05 ch 1, | abuseI realize there are issues with her being head chef and the fact that she was never given the car yet. There are actually consequences of her taking off, which will be later mentioned. As for the car, I know she didn't have it at the time. I'm honestly a Friends encyclopedia, I could even admit it's kind of sad. But in order to make the story work, some events took place at different times than in the sequence of the show. |
| Exintaris 2007-11-04 ch 2, anon. | abuseI'm sorry, but ... Monica's *head chef* at Allesandro's! She *can't* just take off a day when she feels like it (and at this point in time she doesn't have her father's Porsche). In fact, in the show she's around a lot more than a head chef would be likely to be, but the show is never too realistic about their work. Other than that, this was quite fun. |
| lilly 2007-11-04 ch 2, anon. | abuseglad to see another chapter :0) i liked the first one a lot. the style is great and the characterization is spot on. keep it up :0) |
| mondlerlove 2007-11-04 ch 2, anon. | abuseThat was cute! Please update! |
| Kate56 2007-11-04 ch 2, | abuseNice to see you back. |
| Exintaris 2007-10-21 ch 1, | abuseMonica kisses Chandler in full view of Gunther? H'm ... risky, I'd say. I like this. it's well written, sounds like them. Just one thing: Chandler broke up with Janice, when they were really in love, in 3,8. We are now somewhere early in Season 5. So, only 2 years (since each season is roughly a year of time in Friendsworld), and this is ignoring the Yemen episode (4,15). |
| DrKerryWeaver 2007-10-19 ch 1, | abuseAww so cute! I love Mondler!! |