Wow, that didn't suck at all.
Thanks.
I've tried to imagine so many times how George would really react/feel about the loss of his twin, Fred.
Thanks for writing your version so well.
I think it's very much what would've happened.

WAH! So sad...

I absolutly adore the last part of it =]
really good

This was good. I think that you did a good job showing how George must have felt.

Wow, excellent work!
This was so sad and so amazingly written... It almost made my cry, and I'm not a frequent crier!
This was a fantastic story, I mean it!
Keep up the good work =]

-Skye

It didn't suck at all. It was really, really nice. It's an interesting slant on George as well. "I'm free. . ." Wow. You could read a lot into that. I think it was very well done. Good job!

His grief in this is so very real. You really capture the Weasley's. Wonderful dialog. Excellent showing. Great word choices.

This is going in my favorites.

Definitely doesn't suck! I love how Ginny is the one to come and comfort George, and the idea that Fred would want them to carry on.

No, it doesn't suck at all. If I am sitting here sobbing, it is actually quite the opposite. I loved it, every brilliantly tragic moment. Thank you.

first reviewer! yeah!

oh come on, it didn't suck. was impressed with your ability to write both serious & funny things equally well. poor george...my heart breaks for him. the pillow thing made me choke up. AGH! JK Rowling seriously has no idea how much she marred my existence by killing off Fred. But at least she gave us oodles of closure...um...NOT. Which is why I'm currently obsessed with post DH george fics.

anyway, loved the "keep breathing" thing from grey's. perfect use of it. you should put out more serious stuff...& *cough* reveiw my emo george fic because it has 2 new chapters up *cough* in conclusion, i'm glad that i've continued to slack off of college to read this.

cheers,
KJ