you made me cry how beautiful story

That was SO sad...Really good job!!

Ow, that is so painful. I wonder why Nathan often hide his feeling. You live up your name as queen of angst.
I also wonder have you written anything not angsty?

What a sad and gripping story. Very introspective and it shows where Nathan's mind is right now. Well done!

Poor hons! Poor Nathan! Turning to boose when he couldn't cry anymore. It's alright. Peter is alright. You will find him soon. He needs you. Like always, as you need him! Good story!

Aw how beautifully sad. -sniffs- excellent writting Anna!
-zooky-