ooooohhh...i like it, i like it...very interesting...very well written. good plot. great story. and a perfect ending. :):):):)

VampHunter

you are writing more to this right? I hope so. I WANNA KNOW WHAT HAPPENS!

awww. very good. excellent. i liked it.

I liked this a lot. Good writing, and I love emotional Edward. You really pegged his shifts, back and forth between shielding his thoughts/emotions and showing them, very well done there.

OMG!How cute!Keep up the great work!

sorry last time i reviewd i said my story but i ment your story. sorry. but i still loved it. i still read it every now and then.

Beki

Great story. Exceedingly cute.

Awwwwwwwwwww...I love Edward and Anita together. It's sooo cute

that was really good.

that was good although edawrd told anita that he never had romnatic feelings for her in Obsidian butterfly whihc was a fab book (all those books are fab)

i loved my story and my friend recomended it to me but still i loved it.

AWSOME

I liked the story i found it very true to the characters.I think Anita and Edward would make a great couple if it weren't for Richard or Jean-claude which i happen to love her with, but at the same point I loved the story and wished there was more. Good Job!

thats good. you have talent, bye

Edward and Anita? No, but this story kicks ass. It's so cute