That line was hysterical! That's only if you're a drunk teenager who can't get home after the club! we were kidnapped! We were locked up! You were shot at!And then she says I was called little!That sounds exactly like her!As if that was the worst crime of all!LOL!PLEASE keep updating!I most read more!

pretty good- I can't wait to read the next chapter!

Ah! Update! Please! Or I will die! And I don't want to die! *whines*
Update?

Oh Please please PLEASE write more!! I entreat you by all that is good and holy. D8 I need more!!

I really, really, REALLY wish this was actually the sequel. Your dialogue is IMPECCABLE. And the new characters just sound EXACTLY like ones I'd see in a Pixar movie. I adore Chip n' Dale, btw. XDXD You are...infinitely adored forever for writing this. THANK YOU! And I can't wait to read more!!...

Update! Please! This story is so good... please? And soon? Soon would be good. Soon would be very good.
There, it's decided. You should update soon.

Bravissima! At last Colette receives some medical attention before she bleeds to death (I liked the twist with the doctor a lot!). And Anton will bring the killer (attempted) to justice. One way or another.

Looking forward to the competition!

Thank you for sticking with this story and updating it. As I've mentioned before, I have pet rats, and you write with such great compassion for the little misunderstood creatures that just delights me-- thank you for granting Remy and Emile and their brethren such dignity. And for a fun story. :)

Hello,

This is an incredibly interesting story. Most definitely the best of the Ratatouille fanfics on this site so far. I hope that you update it soon (yes, I realize that you just updated it).

One little criticism about something in your notes: the comment about Ego 'obviously' being gay. Please, don't make conclusions about a person by the way they carry themselves. I've had that false assumption made about myself (in some not very nice ways).

Again, very good story. The actors seem to be in character. I love the way you put such intensity of friendship between Remy and his 'human family'. Looking forward to more.

The PreacherMan

I finally get a chance to review this marvelous chapter!
Okay, so my new thing is babies. I've never appreciated babies more, for some reason. It must be my biology. I just squeal and swoon over any child under 3 years old... That said, can anything be more adorable than Colette and Linguini's son holding Remy's arm? Thank you for making me feel warm and fuzzy with all the baby stuff!

Nice use of describing words for the blood. As soon as I read "metallic," I knew what was up.

Yay, I love the name!

Now the hospital scene. And Colette arguing with the doctor. Hilarious. Very her. But at times a little much. Maybe I've lost touch with Colette as a character because it's been ages since I've written her, and I've changed a lot in the last year. But she was kind of being irrational, in my opinion. Then again, it was because she thought it was a man and his women-are-weak beliefs telling her she needs to stay in hospital. So, okay. I can see why she's acting up.

Anyway. It was hilarious. I loved finding out the doctor was a woman! "Well that's different!" What a great line.

I still adore Pierre. Anton's sadness is so poignant, and so is Pierre's trying to help his friend while also trying not to let his heart be broken again.

Thanks for a great chapter! Look forward to reading more.

This is definitely the best Ratatouille fanfic ever. It's a shame you haven't updated in so long...are you planning on continueing this anytime soon?

Um...
Its been over 8 months since you last updated. Are you going to do it again soon?

I love this chapter. Period. :) =D

Hi! Just wanted to let you know that this is still one of the best stories on ffn, and I do hope you continue it. :)

I am in love with your story. Eloquent and clever writing, in-character yet novel characterization, and intriguing, well-paced storyline. The skill and talent in this story easily allows readers to imagine the story as a sequel to the Pixar film.

The interjection of French phrasese doesn't detract from the story at all. The flow is natural and even without any knowledge of French, one can easily comprehend the gist. So, the use of French flavours the story even more. The detail and depth of the details about France and the French are already really impressive!

I look forward to each new installment. :) Poor Anton! I'm completely hanging on hearing more about what happened in his past and how it will affect his relationship with Linguini and Colette in the future. (Threesome?! :DD) The way you're building the relationships between them is perfect, I adore it.