This story was just wonderful. I especially liked how real you made their situation during the Third Reich. You are quite the accomplished author.

I saw this story many times since its initial posting, and each time turned it away in favor of another. Why? The simple fact it was based on WWII turned me away but I must say I was pleasantly surprised.

While not the longest nor the most evokative work, this remains among the best I have read here. You give a good balance between dialogue and action, pushing the plot with subtle, contemplative tones that only make the story all the more real. Unlike most, you managed to marry characterization with imagery and action perfectly.
Like the soft nostalgia of a rainy day, this fic flows in a way that gently thought-provoking, interesting, and pleasantly understated.
Despite being a very AU work, I must say I truly enjoyed it.
Good work!

OMG, this is such a great story! I laugh-cried so much all the way through!! If you don't mind my saying, you should change the names and try publishing this as a book!! It's wonderful! Though I shouldn't have read it during my exams... ^.^;

Aw...that was so sweet. Q_Q You describe their relationship so well. This chapter was a happy kind of sad. Or a sad kind of happy? If that makes any sense. XD

It made me smile and frown at the same time, heartwarming and goddamn addictive. And I love you for it. 8]

I also loved how you described the relationship between the Osprey and the Heron. Very beautifully written. =] I ENVY YOU.

Amazing chapter! I've read a numerous amount of creative, well written AU fics, but this story is a whole new level!

I especially love Sakura and Deidara's reactions to one another.

OHMYGAWD. ILU KAKASHI. 8D

Hehe. Sorry, just that Kakasaku moment was totally awesome sauce and made me fangirl squeal.

XD

Wow. I have been so busy lately that I haven't been able to continue reading this awesome story. But now I have time. 8D And I am amazed yet again.

Deidara flying a plane is pure smex. 8D

My favourite line would be.

“Go to hell.”

“I am on my way right now, yes.”

XD

LOL!

Their relationship is portrayed so realistically.

Loved the mental images of naked Deidara. <3!

Aw, that was cute.

Hidan's present cracks me up! XD

And goddammit, you write the moods for every scene so well. Especially that staircase part. I was feeling as shit scared as Sakura was. O_O And I'm alone in my room too. LOL. That didn't help matters! XP

Wow! Talk about bad timing, being stopped in the middle of THAT. Poor Deidara. He must feel utterly depraved. XD

Hehe, though I am glad Hidan and Kakuzu are in this. XD They're awesome too. <3

I knew it! Hehe. When I was reading the very smexy DeiSaku scene, I was wondering why he spoke such good English. o.O

I love your writing style, did I ever mention that?

Anyway, this AU story is totally a new experience for me, since it's not the typical AU story and makes it that much more exciting and unpredictable.

I never usually read anything to do with war, but you write so beautifully, it's addictive and I can't stop reading. XD I think you capture Deidara's pain and emotions really well, specially in that dream of his. Almost made me cry. Q_Q

And I'm very glad to hear that you'll be editing and adding more chapters to this story. I'm already looking forward to it even if it's a long ways away. XD

Awkward Deidara is <3!

Anyway, enough rambling. Prepare yourself for review spamming in your email. 8D

GAW! Cuteness overload. Hehe, Deidara's naivety towards his own emotions is funny. XD "Pre-sexual intercourse ritual?" LOL.

This story totally deserves tons more reviews. It's a shame people don't usually read AU's. Cos this one is bloody awesome and needs more love and attention. <3

Oh yes! I definitely will be interested in this story even in the future, I'm sure! I'll probably keep rereading this over and over again. XD

Seriously, this chapter was kick-ass. It was really funny and Deidara's broken English is just so adorable. <3 I love the relationship she has with Deidara. You keep them in character very well. XD

My favourite line would be...

"Vaguely he wondered if she was good in bed, and if the cot would be able to stand up through all he planned to do with her."

I grinned stupidly at my computer screen when I was reading that part. 8D

Wow, that was absolutely AMAZING! A few popular DeiSaku authors have recommended this fic, and I'm so glad I got around to reading it. XD Really, I can't describe how awesome this chapter was. I've only read one chapter and I'm absolutely hooked!

My favourite lines would definitely be...

"Possibly, he said one or two derogatory comments about Mr. Führer’s mental state. Then there was that time he ran one of the officials out while brandishing a large chisel, just as a joke, because an army officer paid him to do it."

And Sakura looking like a twig dressed as a tree was high-larious. XD

This story is definitely unique. The plot is unlike anything I've ever read in Naruto fandom. Whenever I come across an AU, it's usually always a high school, vampire... etc, etc.

But this is definitely different and an absolute pleasure to read. =D

I like your story and your German is quite entertaining.

What do you mean with "Leibchien"? I can only think of two possibilities:

"Leibchen", which is an antiquated garment for little girls or

"Liebchen", which is an very, very antiquated pet name for girlfriend. At the time of the Third Reich, it was already considered insulting, and could be translated with "bitch". Not a very fitting expression ot grandmotherly affection towards a little boy. More fitting would be: "Mein Schatz" oder "Mein Kleiner".

And "Frau" is not used in exclamations. Deidara would say: "Meine Güte, Weib!" or, because Sakura is still very young: "Meine Güte, Mädchen!".

I am probably being a hypocrite right know, because I made in this short text more mistakes than you in the whole story in German. But I still think that your German is worse than my English.

You never ever made one mistake with the vocals ä ü and ö. Not even English novels or English newspapers manage to do that. That is really great.

The few mistakes you made are not important, and the only ones who will notices are the few Austrians, Swiss and germans who read your story. Keep good work up!