Lol. Cute ^^

Ari chan

all dialogue is my favorite - it's not weird haha you did a nice job ^_^

Oh the lovely thoughts of love.. as of being a teenager too! Lol Yahiko is growing up XD

Ari chan

beautiful fic. especially the winter one

Definitely not obvious!! However, it was very touching to read it!! =)

Aw, these were so cute! I'm at a loss for what else to say. Good luck on the next one.

its a really cute poem

in the first line did you mean seeing instead of see

Yet a third chapter! Going well. I'm not a big fan of poetry, but this one was pretty good. The first time I read it, I wasn't sure about the pairing, but of course you mention it in the note. Upon a second reading, I recognized them, of course. Little typing error, I think. In the very first line you say 'There's nothing like see you.' Did you mean 'seeing you'? Even though its a poem, verb agreement is still necessary. Once again, thanks for writing this fic! I look forward to the fourth chapter...a few guesses out there!

lovely poem - i enjoyed it ^_^ i can't write poetry to save my life sadly enough - it's really a beautiful form of writing. thanks for the nice update - i can't wait for fall! ^_^

A chapter regarding young love between Yahiko and Tsubame. I enjoy reading it very much!! Simply can't wait for the next season!! Update soon k!! =)

So very sweet! Good look into Yahiko's thoughts

Nice story about Misao and Aoshi. I love the pairing. Can't wait to hear about Kenshin and Kaoru.

hahah i can imagine yahiko thinking this. of course picking flowers isn't girly ~_^ in fact, we want *more* guys to do that for us! hah anyways, i'll be looking forward to the next chapter!

ooh, i loved this! very nice job ^-^ on to the second one!

(p.s. i liked the second quote in the beginning of the chapter ~.^)

they are yahicco and tsubame right?