this is really good so far!! i hope u update soon!

this is really good so far!! i hope u update soon!

plz update son!

“Miss? Miss, are you ok?’ he touched my shoulder before he realized that this sleeve is empty. ‘Miss?! Oh my God! Oh… **. **! **! Did her arm fall off?!’ then he checked under the bed for my arm… ‘oh **… he’s gonna blame me for this…’ and then he ran off.”

that is so awesome xD poor allen! <3
is cross a necrophile?? o.O

ZOMG! the thought of cross dancing with timcampy, just too much to bear *starts cracking up* **family gives me strange looks**

fantastic story...i thought it was finished, though...you will finish it, will you?

...before I advance to the end of this story as published so far, I must say that the last five lines made me cackle hysterically.

Respect for Cross LOWER.

Confusion gettin' HIGHER.

Respect: 68%

Confusion: 34%

Damn it :( Sad face...

Respect for Cross going down. Is now at 99.9%. Sad face. :P

Really? They don't contact their family? Woah... cool hearted anyone? Oh wait... Ah, that's a good thing... I think.. so the Earl doesn't make them make an akuma. Or something like that. Yeah, something like that...

I love this story already! I swear, you're an awesome author. A hellva fantasic one.

YAY! Harra harra harra!

I'm not very uh... Far along with the manga, so I don't know alot about Cross. I'm nearly up to the bit with Gross in Japan, so I hope I can learn more about him then.

I mean, I think Cross seems like an awesome guy, and it's really cool to see a story that can tell me more about him when he found Allen and when they uh... lived together? So thanks for doing a story about him! I'm sure heaps of people are thank=full for it too. :)

I loved 'Mana' and I love this story too! I really like these stories of lost times/of the past. ...how far will this go up to? until Cross abandons Allen telling him to go to the Order? I know this story is from Cross's POV, but I kinda want a little more of Allen's suffering, like from the debts. Because in the series Allen goes catatonic just from remembering his time with Cross and paying back his debts. It just doesn't feel right w/o some debt suffering. Anyways, love the story! ^_^

I hope this turns into a yaoi ^^ if not CrossAllen then maybe Yullen or TykiAllen?

This story is really amazing. I haven't watched/read all the anime/manga so I don't really know if Maria was really brought to life like that, but in the mean time I'm just going to believe that.
The story is just really believable.
Please continue writing&updating!
good luck~

sincerely -shikamarurules1

ooh, thats creepy. ugh, no, really, it is. dead people...ugh. keep it up, ok? OH! i think thatyou should make a one shot where lavi and lenalee and them all see allen go into one of his fits or something, like he was remembering that time in the alley. sorry, i just thought of that. it would be a really cool angst fic.