Beautiful. one of my favorite pairings. And it was a good job, too. I'd want to steal your skill so I could improve my own fic, which is essentially(I'm not stealing anything though!) putting this one into an actual story, rather than a short little mind..something.

That was sweet, and I have to agree with Orihime those zombie-shark-alien things do seem scary!

cool. Liked how you constantly change pov's

never really been into yuri, but this just touched me somehow.

That was sweet, I liked that story, those two should TOTALLY end up together in the actual manga/anime, obliviously Tite Kubo has no problem making a chick lesbeing beyond all reason, I just wonder if he'd go as far as making an actual yuri pairing.

Of all first person fics i've read, this must be the cutest...it just makes everything so much more realistic. I like the way you write, and apart from a few minor spelling errors i cant complain. I would like to see more from you =D

not bad,not bad ^_^
loved that Tatsuki was jealous of Chizuru's clothes, that was cute

OMG this is so CUTE! Why haven't I thought of this pairing before? It's one of those things you never think about, but when it occurs to you it's lik "duh!" This has inspired me! I think I'll write my own TatsukixChizuru fic sometime soon! I hope you'll read it!

That was a beutiful story. The concept of this pairing had occured to me, but I could never have written something this well done with the idea.

first yuri fic. YAY!

this pairing is so possible, i canrt help wondering WHY oh WHY people dont write more of it. TWO fics?!?!? not possible. not probable. XD

anyways, loved the first person perspective, whatareyoutalkingaboutyoudontknowhowtodoit? its not like you couldnt tell who was talking, er.. thinking. loved it.

"Except for maybe shark zombie brain-eating aliens."

You worry too much about using the first-person perspective; some people struggle with it, and thoughts seem choppy and awkward, but you pulled it off very well. It was clear who was narrating when, and getting to see the inner thoughts and feelings made this whole piece extra cute. I especially loved Chizuru's POV, because so few people write about her, and she was just like she should be.
Orihime's thoughts were really sweet and funny too, the sadness at 'losing' her friend coupled with the joy at her being happy with someone else. All very in-character.
Thanks for writing this~

O.O finally a story! whoho!

Aw! That was so cute~ 5/5 stars, definitely! There's not enough ChizuruxTatsuki fics ;__;

Keep on going, hon~! 8DD

omg...i love this couple but no one seems to write about it...maybe its cause chizuru is a minor character...
i think you captured her very well...the part with hime-chan was so her...shark zombies lol
i love your work can't wait to read more!

I've always wondered why nobody seems to ship these two, so congratulations on being the first! I liked the development you show between these two. You were also right about the first person viewpoint being a bit awkward-- I'm not entirely sure if one chapter is long enough to do first person unlimited well.

Still, your take on the pairing is interesting, and I hope you write more at some point.