This made me cry < 3

Lovely!
This was both so sad and so sweet at the same time and I really enjoyed it :)
I can see why others would think that the ending should have been the beginning of something else because your last line is what you would generally expect to find in a first chapter or prelude to a longer story but all the same it's wonderful and I really liked it!

Aww, that was so sad and sweet :(

It doesn't seem complete. The last line didn't finish like it should of. When you see the last line of a story(that doesn't have a sequel) it should be like, 'oh, it's finished!' The whole thing seems a bit rushed. I did love it though and it was brilliant and heart tugging but it is the ending that should really hit you.

No! So sad! No! You see, in my little world that belongs solely to me, you wrote another chapter where they live happily ever after. I love my little fantasy world. But it was a really great story!

This seems totally unfinished. It's a decent start, but it needs at least another 5-10 chapters.

this is soo cute
i luuv it
write more!
and soon!
and longer chapters!

Really liked it!:) Especially that last line... Would really like to see Oliver's point of view.. But, if not, it's still very good:)

that was really good, just add a bit more to the point of where they get together

You know, I really want to see Oliver's side of this. Even though, It's all about Katie's thoughts, I'd still like to see what he would think about Katie after all those years apart... I don't know...

But good story anyway though. I really liked it.

~,'~@Lindsay Marie@~',~

Beautiful in its simplicity.

i really liked this and the way you wrote it. it feels true and the kind of stream of conciousness writing that comes from a person truly filled with emotion.

thank you for not writing about the common characters and not making some terrible gay love triangle. it is much appreciated.

la artista di fame.

-Cries-