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Reviews for: Disturbing Parallels
Laurie Jupiter 3/5/11 . chapter 1
I'm a bad person. I favourite this and I don't even review.

Well, better late than never right?

Lindsey was always one of the most interesting 'villains' in Angel. He just had so much inner conflict and moral ambiguity, it's a shame that he died in season five. I think that a Cordy/Lindsey pairing is a great idea! It's so unexpected and rare. The way you highlighted the similarities to their past was well-done and exposed a lot more about themselves. I wish that an interaction like this *had* taken place on the show, it would have given Cordelia some more depth (not that she didn't have any before).
Dudly 3/8/09 . chapter 1
That was fine fiction.

I liked it. It had a nice feeling of flat truth, could-happen moments. I liked the way he looked at her and went, "Are all the guys gay?" XD

And pretty much all of it, really. I like the fact that she didn't kiss back. Of course she wouldn't. Not under those circumstances (now, in another reality...)

Dudly xx
WatsonandMary4ever 10/4/08 . chapter 1
A great story. Very good.
anonymous 8/22/07 . chapter 1
ok i liked the beginning of this until i realised it was cordelia/lindsey just EW sorry but seriously thats just pure sick, and why are you making cordy look like such a s lut in this!
Morbid Muse 2/22/02 . chapter 1
Oh, wow! Really emotional roller coster. I would like to see Lindsey go back!
A reader 1/8/02 . chapter 1
I really liked this story. I had never thought about any connection between Lindsey and Cordelia, but this scene between them points it out vividly. The way you set it - Cordelia in pain and tank top, Lindsey informally dressed - created a great atmosphere, especially the sense of the empty hotel and the hum of the computer. And of course, the questions - why did Lindsey pick up the twelve-year-old girl? Why come to Angel? Perhaps his statement, "I need help," is a bit more layered, eh? I would love to see another scene between these two character, and I do hope that you'll write another one! The kiss at the end was very hot, but I liked your decision to end it there. Very good judgement. But what if ... ? :) Lots of great possibilities for further interactions! Great writing!
Kus Kus 8/29/01 . chapter 1
Wow, always did regret that Lindsey was no longer on the show. Nice depiction, short and sweet.
Sonar 8/27/01 . chapter 1
I want to see one where Wesley and Lindsey meet
Audra 8/27/01 . chapter 1
Excellent story... very impressive with the decriptives and the emotion. Way to go! Maybe you could carry on with the Lindsey/Cordelia thing. It's very interesting.
zero 8/27/01 . chapter 1
Very cool; an emotional and fairly visual story that really draws you in to what's going on not just on the surface but behind these characters as well. Great work.
HonorH 8/26/01 . chapter 1
Excellent! This is a Cordy/Lindsey pairing I can actually believe. The hostility between them screams sexual tension, and her responses to him ring true. Wonderful work!
jaywalker 8/26/01 . chapter 1
I really liked this. Two of my favourite characters in a credible encounter. You portray both Cordy and Lindsey brilliantly here, their mutual hostility ringing very true. A fascinating insight into both characters.
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