kool! THATS SO AWESOME! AND TOTALLY ORIGINAL, BELLAALWAYS GET REINCARNTED!

but the whole jacob got dissed part was just tots radd. ] eep writin, pplleeaase!

xx bella

the shopping scene was a bit awkward but all-in-all not bad. i want to see how you resolve this.

no edward's dead. it's ok, i won't lecture you... now she can be w/ jacob ;)

aw that's so awesome they found each other!

i like it though i'm sad edward, poor edward. i feel like killing victoria now *goes and kills victoria!*

interesting. very interesting. you should think about continuing this plot line.

Yay! Edward's back! Thank goodness! *comes out of corner and cheers* Ha! Now Bella's the vampire and Edward's the human... D I love how some things work out. )

oh that is very sweet. Edward comes back and he's still named Edward! I've never read a story quite like it. keep up the good work!

Oh my gosh... Even though you did the unthinkable it was still extremely well written. That last line when Edward said goodbye was REALLY said... good job though *hides in a corner and mourns*

*points dumbfoundedly that computer screen*

you killed Edward?

*grabs a knife from the kitchen*

*Threatens* bring him back...bring him back...