I dont agree with the fate thing I think that we are bound to make certain choices beacuse of are character and no matter what wed make them beacuse were like that but it sounds alot like Fai! This story is really good! Are you going to put a sequel thatd be interesting to see what happens after.

I'll be honest and say I expected more of a crack fic when I read the summary and the first segment, but this was actually pretty well written. :) I love the style and the sort of depth to it that I, personally, can never capture.

And I like how clean the end is; I'll admit I read the occasional smut fic (haha, who doesn't now a days?) but I would never write one, and this ending seemed to fit more to the style you set than a smutty end would.

Very nice.