Wonderful writing

Oh this is beautiful and so heartbreaking. That scene in Unending just killed me. I like to think that something like this happened, giving both Sam and Cam a reason to go on.

This is lovely.

I think you've managed to powerfully convey alot of emotion and conflict and connection with very few words.

I like the idea that Sam is outside his door listening to Mitchell losing it. I like that you don't hide the fact he's crying and she knows. And I like that Sam is there to help him get his ** together after he's spent his rage.

You captured Cam's frustration perfectly - "The hopelessness. Bitter. Angry. Alone. Trapped in this ship with the knowledge that it will be the last thing he ever see’s and that for all the long years he lives, no one will even miss him."

Really wonderful!

Very bittersweet. I like!!

Beautiful. Especially loved the last line

lovely story

that was amazing. Thanks

That was lovely, poignant, and just the way I see their friendship.

seva