Reviews for What You Missed

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Ocaj 2008-09-02 ch 11,	abuseIt makes for a good chapter. But it's rather chilling to find that pregnant women actually talk about that stuff so openly. I'll take your word for it though. I still think this is my favorite "story line". I like all these moments. Keep writing!
lorelessbison 2008-08-31 ch 11,	abuseThis reminds me of the movie: Father of the Bride part II. Oh, man. I'm old enough to know such a movie, crud. Anyways, nice side story. Can't wait to read more.
nutshak 2008-08-29 ch 11,	abuseyay for familiness! Keep it up!
Summer Sweetheart 2008-08-28 ch 11,	abuseNice! And in reply to your response to me, I read the Air Lost Scrolls thing a while ago, and I noticed that like "Oh... I think I once told someone that that's pro'lly not true..." Heh. Ah well. Looks like you did your homework! ^_^
Moongirl83 2008-08-02 ch 10,	abuseDang. 20 kids? How many sets of twins and triplets do they have?
ilovekataang 2008-07-31 ch 10,	abusehey. when are you gonna do another chapter? or is this the last one? i absolutely LOVE this kind of story. i really like when Lam and Kuzon said: "Baby" and "And another baby". it was really cute. i LOVE three-year-olds. they are so cute and innocent. i cant even imagin ever scolding my future children, one of which im probably gonna name after Aang or Katara. Possibly Lam or Kuzon, too. ok, just wanted to know! bye!
Ocaj 2008-07-30 ch 10,	abuseThis is beautifull, wonderfull... Well, wanted to say that a long time. I hope you'll make some more airbending lessons. It's weird but fun reading these short stories. They resemble just normal situations in every day life(talking bout the lesson now, not the delivery), yet there still so much fun and so special.
lightspeedc 2008-07-29 ch 6,	abuseI like this one, jealous Katara is always fun to read...jealous aang would probably be too nice to actually do anything until it was last moment but katara...will do something about it. I hope you'll write more stories where the couple have their downside (katara jealous)
Aangs fangirl1214 2008-07-11 ch 10,	abuseI'm glad you're husband got a job! 12 or 13 for marraige? That's a bit creepy. Wow, a lot happened at the temple that day. :) Atleast Keylana and Tien-Anh are responsible!
BlackRose108 2008-06-17 ch 10,	abuseI loved this chapter, i've been waiting for you to have a "giving birth" story on this and you handled it well, as always. I just have a quick question for you, did you plan out how many children Aang and Katara had, their names, and the years they were born all before writing this or did you just wing it? Because if I winged it I would get seriously confused after a while. And just a thought, I know this story is supposed to be about Aang and Katara's married life but it would be awsome if you could have a stroy on what actually happened during their wedding. (and I know about and have read your story "Wedding Night") I just want to know how it turned out, even if it's not really anything special. And if that doesn't fit in with this stroy possibly you could just make it a oneshot, like "Wedding Night"? Just a random thought to ponder on. Keep up the good work, please update soon!
shiro-wolfman-k 2008-05-19 ch 10,	abuseHa sinceramente has sanado un poco mi mal herido corazon, ya que sinceramente necesitaba un poco de tus palabras para recuperarse del golpe que recibi con el video. De hecho me has hecho flaquear en mi dura conviccion de que El kataang no sobrevivira, y ahora me has dado esperanzas y el miedo y las inseguridades han regresado... Pues sabes, la mayoria solo se concentra en como crean la relacion, el como procrean y listo. Creo eres una de las pioneras en el area de la maternidad en esta seccion, tanto la de ingles como la de español. Y eso en cierta forma es lo que me hizo sinceramente apreciar tus escritos, claro aparte de tu forma de ver la vida. Eres una gran mujer y tus hijos tienen suerte de teneros como madre, ya que si los crias al igual que como escribes, los dos al menos tendran una infancia satisfactoria y plena. Ruego por que mis miedos sobre el kataang sean eso, simples miedos.
Aangsfan 2008-05-18 ch 10,	abuseI really liked this one, I don't remember the others as much, so I don't know if there's been others like this, but this one shows Aang's real potential to be a father! Lol...awkward moment...
Dakyu 2008-05-18 ch 10,	abuseHah. The last line as well as the little quip about arguing with a woman who'd just given birth at the beginning were quite classic ^^ Excellent work once again, keep it up! Dak
Vanille Strawberry 2008-05-18 ch 10,	abuseThat was so cute. Aang can really stay level headed in those situations. As for the twin stuff, in the first few months you have to change them and other stuff at the same time. At about five months (well that's what it was for us) when one started crying it ususaly meant "Oh, my sister isn't feeling the best" we sort of spoke for each other. It gets kind of freaky, even now! lol. Hope I helped a little Slán Vanille Strawberry
Summer Sweetheart 2008-05-17 ch 10,	abuseAww. That was sweet. The only thing is I don't think Airbenders have to make up a move to become masters, but that's just me. Waiting for the next chapter! ~_^

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