okay wow so let me guess dom and angel are gonna get together so plz finish this soon cant wait ur a good wirter

Keep Going!

why'd you stop this story? it was great! please please post more now!

i know you havenyt like updated this in a while but i like it and think it is really good so if you would be nice i hope you update it soon

this is good! you should really update!

this is great! i want more!

groovy

This was fun. I could see Dominic acting like that.

Like the way it is going! WRITE MORE! I MEAN IT! :)

Please write more!

I think Angel is a good character - the way you are writing suggests Dom may have met his match...I hope you are writing more.

Write more! You is a BAD author for making me wait SOOOOO long! ;_; Kinky story so hurry up and upload new stuff!

how beautiful! u should post more of this! i wanna read it... it doesn't suck don't worry! mine was worse... thats why its gone!

Love it so far. Can't wait for the next part! Keep up the good work!