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TenshiNanashi 2008-07-21 ch 4,	abusethis rocks. and is written in such a way as to make it actually plausible. And the characterization is spot on. ~Tenshi
Marisa1 2007-12-13 ch 4,	abuseOh. My. God. This is so amazing-you captured EVERYONE so well. I loved the Hatian's voice Simone in chapter 3 was absolutely hysterical! Nikki was great. But most of all, I love your Nathan. I love how you're able to find the heart underneath all his pragmatism. I honestly felt teary at the end. I loved all the foreshadowing-Gabriel with his mom, Nathan putting Isaac and Simone in Linderman's hands...all of it. My only regret is that I've never seen Star Wars. So many good lines, but the one that I have to say is my favorite is Angela's line about Hiro developing a thing for Texas waitresses. Gold. And it makes me feel a little bad that Nathan and Nikki get together, because they could have been good friends for each other. You should really do an AU- what would have happened if Nathan had managed to get away. What I love about this story is how smoothly it fits as a prequel to the series. I'm serious, this is one of my favorite fanfics EVER. ~M
Paige and the Loquacious Ta... 2007-11-30 ch 3,	abuseHey, I just realized I made a typo. When I said one of the best things I'd ever written, I meant 'READ'. Terribly sorry. I'm sure that must have been insulting to you.
Paige and the Loquacious Ta... 2007-11-30 ch 4,	abuseThis was beautifully written and one of the best Heroes stories I've ever written! It was funny and serious and tied in so nicely with the show. I loved the thought of tough Niki paired in a room with prissy Simone, and I really loved Simone busting Thompson's kneecap. Peter and Hiro were A-D-O-R-A-B-L-E, and Niki's comments were hilarious. Haitian was cool, per usual. Love him, in the show, AND in this! And Nathan! My favorite character in the whole series and you wrote him so well, I really just... Argh! It's so hard to even BEGIN to describe how much I've fallen in love with your story! It's just too awesome! Anyway, you get the point right? Because I'm not blessed with the Power of Rambling I find it difficult to continue - though I did a pretty good job for a while there, didn't I? Much Love, Paige
Thucydides 2007-11-16 ch 3, anon.	abuse“The only bad habit your son could pick up from my son is a taste for waitresses in Texas,” Angela said cuttingly, “and how likely is that?" Mwa-hah! “Breakfast is the first meal of the day, Gabriel,” she said in a tone of exasparation that had to be universal for mothers everywhere. “The most important one. You need to eat yours, or you’ll come to a bad end.” So there it is... Great story. This is possibly the best thing ever.
superlc529 2007-11-10 ch 4,	abuseAMAZING! I liked that story a lot... it would be a cool background story on the real HEROES. I love how he cared for Claire and I think that maybe the Haitian didn't erase all of his memories of Claire b/c he did seem emotional in the actual show trying not to show it by putting on his sunglasses. I like how you gave the Haitian a name. THAT WAS A MARVELOUS STORY AND IT NEEDS MORE REVIEWS!! :)
cirana 2007-11-07 ch 4, anon.	abusegd fic
michellio 2007-10-08 ch 4,	abuseOh my goodness! How does this story only have 10 reviews!? It's amazing! I especially love how this story could easily slip right into canon despite it being ~out there. Absolutely brilliant.
Meshakhad 2007-10-03 ch 4,	abuseAww...
Riana1 2007-10-02 ch 4,	abuseAnd it fits canon, it fits canon so well it makes my terrth ache. Write for the show please.
Riana1 2007-10-02 ch 3,	abuseThey are collecting everyone-- this is so cool.
Nomad1 2007-10-02 ch 4, anon.	abuseWhat a neat idea! I really enjoyed this. Nice job unexpectedly twisting it back to be canon-compliant again.
Elliesmeow 2007-10-02 ch 4,	abuseI really liked that. I liked that Nathan tried to be a good father to Claire and made his request of the Haitian for her sake. Also liked his attempts at taking care of the others after they woke up from having their memories erased. Nice job at making little things like that set others events from the series in motion. -Ellie
amy-the-rat 2007-10-01 ch 2, anon.	abuseLittle!Hiro learning English from Star Wars? Smartass!Simone kicking everyone's asses? This is made of awesome, and so are you. hugs little!Hiro I can't help it, he's so cute.
Reius Devirix 2007-10-01 ch 2,	abuseVery nice. Incredible writing. I'm now wondering how the hell Nathan's gonna get them out of the mess they're in. Oh, and, I love the parts with Hiro. Just adorable. Hehehe...Genius in making it so that the only way they could communicate with each other was to be as geeky as possible.

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