FanFiction.Net - unleash your imagination
| FanFiction.Net - unleash your imagination |
|
| Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Dictionary Search | Login Register Extras |
| kiaga89 2008-08-29 ch 2,  | abusegreat job! I loved your descriptions, and the emotion you conveyed through your words! keep it up! *Kiaga |
| Lucia Rayne 2008-06-10 ch 3, anon. | abuseI liked it very much.. you need to put in a few words here and there.. reread and you will notice .. :D Good job as always! |
| xLaramiex 2008-06-10 ch 3, | abusecoolies me liked it |
| Lucia Rayne 2008-06-03 ch 2, | abusewow, good job! |
| xLaramiex 2008-06-01 ch 2, | abuseaw that's so great |
| singing4ever 2008-05-27 ch 2, anon. | abusevery very very good! i wonder what maerad "did" hmm...i like malgorns fatherly love, we dont see much from him!! ~Singing4ever from sffworld |
| Jennistar1 2008-05-27 ch 2, anon. | abuseVery nice, and it gave me some inspiration! (Runs off to write) :) Please write some more! |
| Pellinorfan11 2008-03-31 ch 1, | abuseAw...I had forgotten how cute Stormy the Stormdog is! |
| xxPellinoriaxx 2008-01-04 ch 1, | abuseO..M..G.. That was ...interesting because I never expected to read that scene from that POV. Good Job! |
| VicTorya Laydon Stevens 2007-12-30 ch 1, anon. | abuseYou know, that's actually a really good first try. My first try? I kept going off topic. This little story puts a spin on what happened when Maerad sang to the storm dog. |
| Mistress Maerad 2007-11-21 ch 1, | abuseAw, I know it really isn't supposed to be, but I found that cute! I like the Stormdog now...even though he was trying to kill Maerad and Cadvan... It was funny, too! You have a good sense of humor. I can see that you like writing animal POVs. :) |
| padfootROX 2007-11-06 ch 1, | abuseaw so cute What in the name of all things Loud and thundery was an owl playing at, pretending it was a boat!-LOL i love it |
| Icelands 2007-10-13 ch 1, | abuseI think it's interesting how you portrayed the Storm Dog's childlike feelings, but I got the feeling that this work was more of a parody/comedy more than a serious, in-depth piece of literature. But this is a good start, and you should definitely keep writing! -Icelands |
| p0iz0nivy 2007-10-11 ch 1, | abuseyeah! WOHO! (smacks alter-ego in the head) This is pretty cool! It captures the part where Maerad said that it's innocent. yeah... Make more? Please? |
| BrazenFerlie 2007-10-01 ch 1, | abuseOnce again, this is really cool! Fresh and interesting, great job! |