Mike birbiglia quote in here! lol great chapter

It's somewhat amusing that I'm actually reading this & its Halloween.


But anyway; I'm getting very depressed at the fact that L will die. D:

OH MY GOD. I'm still alive. LOL! Just kidding. I swear, this has got to be the darkest, most depressing fic I've ever read...but in a GOOD way! I FREAKIN LOVED IT! I definitely have to agree with my friends who classified this as the Best Death Note Fic EVER! Although...since I really don't read that many Death Note fics, I'm probably being biased in that judgment...but who gives a damn?! IT WAS AWESOME!

I LOVED the last chapter! You know...the one BEFORE the Epilogue...it was like WOW. Dudettes! L being a half-breed Shinigami? WTF?? Holy crap I didn't see that coming! (I guess my imagination isn't that great...lol) But the way you described him was AWESOME! I wanna draw him...but I feel I may not do that justice, so I probably won't bother trying. Heh. And the scene where the ground opened up for them...I wanna draw that too! But I KNOW I most certainly won't do THAT justice, so I'll just leave it be. It was just freakin amazing! Oh, and when Near shot Light and started ranting to L about love...priceless. Definitely wasn't expecting that. Heck, he reminded me of a jealous lover...except he was ranting about how love was weak instead of yelling something like "BUT I THOUGHT I WAS THE ONE YOU LOVED?" LOL!

Also, the epilogue was just...lovely. Although I was dying to know exactly what had happened to Light and L, I liked that you simply showed a scene from their past, specifically a point at which they were happy. Or maybe it wasn't their past, but perhaps their 'present' in their death? To me it was like a suspended moment in time that represented that although they didn't get a "Happily Ever After" per say, they were together, and that's all that really mattered. Perhaps that was what you wanted to convey? Either way...I freakin loved it. And of course how it ended with the apple...*sigh* Perfect.

As for the bonus chapter...OMG IT WAS SO FREAKIN CUTE! I LOVED IT!! It was just as tragic as Poison Apple itself, but because of the fairytale style in which it was written, it wasn't nearly as morbid or depressing. I'm AMAZED that you guys managed to contort the story into a fairytale. I loved that it was the same story, but in a different universe! It was so freakin convincing! Damn you're CREATIVE!! Well I mean, you HAD to be creative to create Poison Apple in the FIRST place, but you know...it was like having a reinforcement of the depth of your creativity.

All in All it was absolutely, positively MAGNIFICENT and I really, truly, LOVED IT! Excellent work you guys!!

Peace Out! ^_^

OH MY GOD! The awesomeness! I know I haven't reviewed since like...chapter 10 or something, but that's cuz I had a backache and couldn't use the comp for days, so I saved the chaps on my flash drive and I was reading on the laptop (which isn't connected to the internet) so I couldn't review. But omg this fic is awesome! It is ridiculously morbidly depressing...but still awesome!

I loved the whole bring-L-back-to-life-with-a-heart thing...it was so creepy, but sweet in a way, and then it was just angsty but still sweet and I loved it! I swear, I'm a sucker for angst. Lol. I also loved the scene (can't remember the chapter) where L had to put Near to bed...SO CUTE! I wanna draw something like that now...heheheh.

OH AND OMG MISA! That whole thing with Misa was just like WOW! So unexpected...and Light sleeping with MATSUDA? Oh my inner (more like outer) yaoi fangirl went wild with that one. I'm loving how this fic is just overflowing with yaoi! Oh the yaoi yumminess...lmao! But really, that whole thing had me squealing and yelling "No f**kin way!"...jawdropping stuff!

And onto the issue at hand...YOU KILLED MATT! OMG!! I totally saw it coming though. I was just dying to see when Matt or Mello would die and which one would die first. Lol. Shame on me! But I know what you mean about Matt though. Seriously, the dude was in the series for like...ONE MINUTE and everyone LOVES HIM...like..WTF? I mean, I love him too, but seriously! All he did was say one line and then get shot...repeatedly. I totally agree with you when you say that his death was the coolest thing he did. LOL.

Anyways, I'll stop ranting now. I'ma save the rest of chappies and go back to my reading spree! I probably won't review again till the last chapter...heh. Ja ne!

Peace Out! ^_^

OH MY GOD. That was just...wow. "Sad" doesn't even come close to describing those last two chapters! They were utterly heart wrenching! I mean, I though chp.10 was bad, but omg this one ripped my heart out and tore it to shreds! Light's agony was just so...real. I couldn't even think "I told you so" you know? It was just...wow. Definitely tear worthy. It was even more tragic than the actual series itself! I think that's what made it so amazing; the fact that I KNEW what was going to happen, and yet everything just hit with the force of a freight train smashing into me. It was absolutely AMAZING! I LOVED IT! Excellent work!

Now, I'm totally dying with curiousity about the next act, but if I start it now I won't go to sleep until maybe sometime tomorrow afternoon. Lol. So I shall refrain from reading it for now. Heh.

Peace Out! ^_^

OMG OMG OMG OMG! *dies* That...that...that was so much more awesome than when it happened in the anime! I mean, yeah it was filler and recaps and stuff, but because of the everything else that's been going on in the fic, it was just that much more dramatic when Light regained his memories. The instant change in his personality was brought out so much more by the fact that it now changes his relationship with L...and just when they were finally at a good part in their relationship! It was so...TRAGIC, and you certaily brought that out with the title and recurring motif "tragic magic".

Alas, I actually spotted an error in this fine work! You left out the "r" in "through" in this line: "reality had apparently had a gash suddenly torn into it, though which this… thing had spilled out onto a Tokyo speedway…"

Anyways, onto the next chappie...which'll be the last one I read for today. I'm actually thankful that this fic is structured into acts. It gives me a good point to stop. XD

Peace Out! ^_^

Damn that really was a log chapter, but gawd it was awesome! OMG I swear, this fic is depressing me. The way L treats Light sometimes just makes gets me so downhearted...I mean, what kind of love is that? But at the same time, I love how their relationship is portrayed and explored. It's just grat. To the next chappie I go!

Peace Out! ^_^

WOW. That was even more intense than the last chapter. It was dark, twisted, and somewhat creepy, yet still so damn sexy. I loved L in this chapter. I mean, yeah he was a total bastard and all (even more so than Light in the last chapter) but the way you guys portrayed him was so...compelling. His character just grabbed my in a vice grip and refused to let go. It was just...wow. Perfect. I loved it!

I'm dying to just get to the next chapter...but I think I'd better take a break. I've been reading for more than three hours now...heheh. This fic is damn addictive. XD

Peace Out! ^_^

OMG he raped him. *jawdrop* Frickin awesome! (Not the usual reaction to anything related to rape...lmao) But seriously, it was like...wow.

Oh, and I understand now why you said this would take up two weeks of my life. It's a good thing I have nothing else to do. Seriously, I don't. XD *runs off to read the next chapter*

Peace Out! ^_^

GAH THE AWESOMENESS! Okay, so I took way longer to start reading this than I said I would, but well, I was still on a Code Geass spree...then I had to take a break. Lol. I've only just finally worked up the determination to read this fic. And boy am I glad! It is freakin awesome! I love it! It's SO IN CHARACTER OMG. I swear it feels like I'm watching Death Note all over again! To the next chappie I go!!

Peace Out! ^_^

It's been a while since I read this story. It's beautiful, and in a way dangerous. It's a modern gothic faerie-tale, and I wish it could be officially published. I would buy it.

I came back and read this again when I heard the song 'Angels' by Within Temptation. It's like the theme song for this whole story. =D

And now you two really made me cry! How am I supposed to go my dance-practice with a face like this :D

Aww, the ending was so cute! Kyah! Finally Light, you did someting right! <3 That's my boy!

Well. I started reading Poison Apple and didn't stop for more than a couple 5 minute breaks until I finished it. This story is amazing and so powerful and the love/hate/bundle-of-emotions portrayed between Light and L is so heart-wrenching...Gah. I have no words. It's now 7:30AM and I've been up all night but I have this kind of hysterical tightness in my chest from all the emotions that this story made me feel in such a short freakin' time. INTENSE.xD Yeah, I got a bit involved while reading this...

You guys are seriously out of this world. Poison Apple is perfect...and I have a feeling I'm going to be thinking about it for a very long time. Thank you so much.

This chapter had highs that were higher than kites and lows that were lower than the sea. T_T

My favorite one yet. <3

I really like how you gus get the little twist in every chapter. This story is great, as I have said before. You just don't know what is going to happen next, and I really like, no I love, that feeling! :D

Aww, what a cliffie you have there, I need to run to the next chapter! <3

Eveliina