...How is it that all your stuff can make me cry so easily ;_;

*blink* I don't really know why I like this so much. It makes me want tea, too.

that's really good. Very in character, you really took the recent chapters into consideration. ^_^

Oh, very well written! I especially liked the flow of the dialogue, it was fast but still serious. And the way you described things, I dunno how to say it, but... it added something extra to the story. Not quite sure what, but it had a different flavor, so to speak. ^_^

Anywayz, overall great! *thumbs up*

Wow! The atmosphere is exactly like I imagined it for Outo!

OMG, that's damn beautiful.

For some reason, this story made me feel really relaxed...I like that! Good story.

And then what, indeed.

UGH. Emily. I love the subtleties weaved throughout this piece, the hints that something isn't quite right, that Fai really is running from a past, we know now, he cannot escape from. And Kurogane, ever the intuitive one, knows that very well.

Wonderful, as always.

Oh... deep... I love it! Oh Fai, you darling moody thing you. Love the dynamics. Great job.