I LOVE THIS STORY! I LOVE THE IDEA EVERYONE HAS A CHILD! IT'S SO CUTE!

YOUR A REALLY GOOD WRITER!

omg i love this story...pls post more i see that its been over a year but this story just got good and u stop ...not nice...pls post more son pls...

this story is an amazing sequel for 'the phoenix, the guardian, the angel'. the plot is good. i can't wait to know what is in the bags, and what the parties will be like. judging by edwards expression i would say something bad or embarassing. i love the way you keep swapping between charater's POV. btw just to let you know, even though you might know already, you are on my fav authors list. all four of the things i've read are awesome. reading this story made up for the 2 projects i had to complete at the weekend for monday. they were so boring! anyway keep up the good work. i can't wait for the ending of this and the sequel! :-)

love it =D

ha ha ha thats funny poor edward and bella but wats in the bags that have them so scares i must no pleaze.

the first story and this one is FREAKIN AWESOME!1
UPDATE SOON PLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASE!
i don usualy beg butpleasepleasepleasePLEASEPLEASEPLEASE!
UPDATE

*begging* Please write more! I'm dying to know whats in the bags! I really want to know what happens!

MY HEAVEN! i think this story is GREAT!
If you writer's block is THAT bad, you should post a note in the fic. and say like: "guys i have major writer block can you help?" i dont know... but i really want this story to continue! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
anyway this is excellent!!
Keep up the GOOD WORK!
thank you, -kelsey

I love all of ur storyz they rule! Keep writin

PLEASE UPDATE!

WHAT THE HECK HAPPENED? YOU RANDOMLY STOPPED AT A VERY GOOD AND FUNNY PART. YOU SHOULD CONTINUE. THE ONLY REASON YOU DON'T LIKE WRITING THESE IS BECAUSE YOU LIKE WRITING FUNNY AND ACTION AND NOT LOVE LIKE STUFF SO ALL YOU HAVE TO DO TO GET OVER WRITERS BLOCK IS MAKE IT MORE DRAMATIC AND CHANGE THINGS AROUND TO MAKE IT EASIER TO WRITE.

Gah! i just realized you haven't updated in A YEAR AND 2 MONTHS!!

meh..i thought it said last updated at 11-22-08 not 07! omg.. now this really sucks >.L

what happened to the rest of the story...?!


sorry i just really love this fic

aww! I really love this story.. please you haven't updated in like 2 or so months! I really want to see the parties and wedding!! and of course the sequel i want to see how lily and all the new children grow up!

tis good. very good. even though i had to stop reading before i finished the first chapter. MY MOTHER IS EVIL!EVIL I TELL YOU1 now that that is done, i shall favcorite this story.
adios ;30 :) ' '
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Please hurry with the next one??Also I hope that your writer's block goes away soon, if not already.