Fantastic one-shot with an absolutely hilarious ending. :D

absolutely hilarious. i can imagine a headthunk with the last line

Ha ha!

I kind of don't like West for some reason, so...it would be fine with me if this were true. :)

This is great! Your characters are decently in character, and the plot looks good...update!

“Not again.”


ROFL

omg thats what im saying
theyre so related
i mean, he can fly, its not a coincidence, i dont think it is anyways. i meann... nathans such a fucking whore
god knows who many fucking kids the man has out there!
god claire just cant stay away from the incestt

THIS IS ABSOLUTELY DISGUSTING! THEY R ON A DATE AND THEN THEY FIND OUT THEYRE SIBLINGS? WHAT KIND OF CREEP ARE U? gosh

God, that would be tragic. When I saw that he could fly I was like "What if he's related to Claire?" when I saw the show. It was like that with PeterxClaire too. Why can't Claire get some lovin' without it backfiring. ha ha. This was good.

I like This story! Keep going!

Haha! The ending..."Not Again" I love that. I was totally into Paire before they made them related. I like this idea, but I would hope to god it's not true. :P I mean, come on, they got to give the girl a love interest she can actually be with right? lol. Anyway, that was great, ironic, comical...all in all wonderful.

~Mac

I'm so relieved that I wasn't the only one who had this thought...

Hilarious. :-) (Though I have to wonder how West would ever have known that (a) Nathan was his father; (b) that Nathan can fly ...)

That would suck. Majorly. I wanted Claire and Peter to get together and then they were related! I hope this doesn't happen! Nice fic though. Cute.

"'Not again.'"

LOL. Great ending...The irony is lovely.

Oh that was funny! LOL. Please write more fics.

"Not again." Sadly funny! Well written.