Oh my...This is very well-written.

Many of the fanfics I've read with Rath or Serra portray them as one-dimensional characters (loud, annoying...quiet,antisocial), but you've made them seem really realistic.

I notice that this story is pretty old, so I wonder if you've wrote more of these two characters?

If you have, I would love to read them.

Beautiful writing. You've made me think more highly of Serra now.

I ust say, I have never seen a RathXSerra story before. Very good job!

once again speechless

your writing is so good it makes me feel ashammed at the quality of mine... anyway i still enjoy reading more than writing

WHEE!

that's a nice idea. Rath Serra friendship sounds good:):)

Oh, wow. I thought it was great!

I really liked how you wrote this. I think you portrayed both Serra and Rath wonderfully.

Keep up the good work!

VERY nice. Loved your characterization of Serra, and reading about Rath always makes me smile for some reason, he's not even my top-favorite character, but somehow I feel he doesn't get as much love as he could...maybe it's just me!

Oh dang. If this is your first Fire Emblem fic, please keep on writing more. O_O

The characterization was wonderful! You actually portrayed Serra in a much more realistic way than most people portray her (loud and annoying), and the ability to see through a character like that is incredible. Many veteran FE writers can't pull that off, and yet you do it in your first try.

Keep on writing Fire Emblem I say!

I liked it, it was nice and I thought you portrayed both of them very well.

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