 TripleS-18 2008-04-28 . chapter 1Excellent story! Original plot idea and decent grammar too. I'm impressed. |
 Bethany C. MacKenzie 2008-02-22 . chapter 3intriguing; i've never seen much heidi fics... glad you put her in here :P
is there going to be a paring in this story? :O |
 accio yelchin 2008-02-17 . chapter 3I really love this fic! It's witty and true to the characters, but still edgy in content and all. Original plot, too. Can't wait to see where it's headed. |
 otherrealmwriter 2008-02-17 . chapter 3This story is very interesting. I like how you can keep the charachters in charachter and how Cartman interpited the scarlet letter thing. It seemed like something he would really have said. I like the drama going on with Kenny and how it is devolping. Keep it up! :) |
 Otempora42 2008-02-17 . chapter 3Oh, man, you updated. :) I love Kenny in this. He's very dryly sarcastic. I'll be waiting for the next chapter! |
 SouthParkism 2008-02-17 . chapter 3very good so far! can't wait for the enxt chapter hope its soon =] |
 otherrealmwriter 2008-01-13 . chapter 2This is an interesting story so far. I like how Kenny wants to save Heidi from hell. The Satan Chris relationship mention is good too. This ties in a lot with Satan in South Park. Can't wait for more. |
 churry 2007-10-26 . chapter 1the prologue is awesome already,so chapter one must be even better.
i adore kenny, i'm so glad he's the main character in this story! |
 AkatSaku 2007-10-11 . chapter 2Ooh, this is getting interesting! Keep writing! |
 Otempora42 2007-10-08 . chapter 1I like this fic. The storyline is intriguing, and Chris rocks. :) It's fluffy, but I like fluff. Update soon! |
 One On Infinity 2007-10-01 . chapter 1Oh my, God, you killed Heidi. And Kenny. You're a double bastard. But I love you anyway because this is so cute. =]
"Welcome to hell, sweeheart". I burst into schoolgirl giggles when I read that.
Obviously, the actual chapters should be a bit longer, but since it's a prologue it doesn't matter too much. Most prologues are short.
Liking it so far!
-OPL |