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But seriously, everything is so good! You've kept the characters true to their musical counterparts (since I can tell the musical is more of an inspirtaion than the book) and the relationships between them are believable and don't seem awkwardly thrust in there. And the writing is just so engaging and I seriously read this in, like, a DAY because I couldn't wait to find out what happened next!

I'm actually not that big a fan of the musical (I was obsessed with the book before seeing the play...so yeah) but I actually went back and started listening to the soundtrack again. SO FEEL GOOD ABOUT THAT IF NOTHING ELSE.

So, long review is longer than I intended, so I will stop here. Please continue writing!

I still don't get how the future still could be THERE! ... The original future that is... I also wonder why Glinda and NMorrible's bodys dissapeared... if the future was there, but they apparently send back their minds, souls, not their old bodys - I at least would expect them tojust lay around, dead or like dead... - Anyway, it's your story and you have to know where it is going.

I wonder what Elphaba's and Glinda's real plan is.

Will put you on story alert.

Bye, Tam

All right... now you put future-Fiyero and future-Elphaba into that mess, too? ... Time traveling? ... or are they to stay in their own time? is said time even still existing? souldn't some things HAVE changed?
Good, you did manage to confuse me. ;)

Aw... to sad I can not give you another country where your story is read... I am from Germany... hm... i could point your story to one of my Swedish friends, she might like it...

ELPHABA! Stop hurting yourself like this! - Silly, silly girl! It's not fault what and who either of her fathers are, blood does not matter that much anyway and she does not have to find excuses for any action of another person. - Looking for excuses for how somebody acts does not seem to be like her, anyway, so why is she even doing it here?

Hey,k aren't Boq and Nessa dating? so how could Glinda say "it's not as if anybody in here was dating?"... I think that Nessa and Boq are in love is pretty much comon knowledge...

a lot of stuff the friends have to try to sort through , a lot of knowledge about how they could turn out... - hope they at least believe Glinda AND don't hate her for not telling them first... and telling them now...

Damn, hope Elphie will get over her super-depressed-selfdestructive-and-hagteful mood, soon.

Yes, glinda should tell her friends... I can see how hard that is, though.
What do the girls plan for the wizard? they do HAVE some sort of plan, right?

Cute little Fiyero/elphaba moment there. - Seems as if they start to feel - more - for each other...
Damn complicated decision Elphaba and Glinda are facing now. - I still say: Go to the wizard, look as if you are playing his game, but play your own in secret, openly defying him before the time would not work (as shown), so you have to collect evidence that he is not as he seems... sheme and plan... I know it's nothing Elphaba is good at, but it's pretty much the only option left.

There it is: the big relevation! ;)
Morrible is a time traveler, too... And for some reason I don't know she only could travel back in time by taking somebody (or maybe even exactly Glinda?) with her...
Wow, of course Glinda has to take the letter to Elphie... the two should plot, though. - Why don't use politic against politicans like the wizard and Morrible? ... Do as if you are on their side and then undermine their plans... - Think things out and don't work rash... it would be a dangerous game, of course, but it could work. - The wizard pretty much thinks everybody would fall for being seen as special, anyway...

Just read the first chapter and this is already looking immense, fresh and original. Looking forward to reading the rest! Great work, crisp writing which is always a bonus. Cheers

Oh Boq! - First it was wanting to impress another girl, then pity and in the end the poor guy had near no way to move away from Nessa! - Of course he started to hate her...
I just hope your Boq/Nessa couple will never go that way, they are so cute togehter!
So Glinda told? and Elphie first was confused and kinda mad but in the end continued to be Glinda's friend? ... So THAT is all right then, at leas. :)

Now, I refuse to believe Elphie said what she did say at the end of last chapter on her own accord. - I think she by now trusts Galinda enough not to think the other girl is trying to take advantage of her in any way... So, there is only one explanation left: she said what she said because Glinda asked her to and it was the favour.
I hope I am right.
Nice that they all are forming sort of a group of friends now, btw. - they all kinda knew each other last time around but it was not on an "all friends"-base like it is now.

"rock my socks"? that's an interesting phrase and I think I get what you mean... but it's new to me... Deloighful, funny, though. (enlighs is not my motzher tongue, so I love to learn new phrases and sayings...)
Now to that chapter:
the Nessa/Boq pairing of yours turns into something extremely cute! - They are just a sweet couple now, that it is actually about love on both sides. - And that it is proves Boq getting envious.
I would like to read the walk Fiyero and Elphaba had... will have a look ingto your profile in a sec to see if your wrote it...
I liked the little scene with Faris. - One realy sees in such small things how much Glinda actually changed and matured.
Keep up the good work.
Bye, Tam

Hm... I guess borwn goes good with green (better than most shades of pink, anyway, whatever Glinda might insist!) ... I somehow can imagine Elphaba in the dress now. - She probably looks prettya in an unque way. :)
I hope the party will go well for the four friends.
I also wonder if Fiyero will start being interested in Elphaba next chapter or if it will take some time...

Wait... Fiyero is early there at Shiz? - how did this happen? and why?
I like that Boq is starting to care for Nessa. - He realy seems to LIKE her this time around. :)
Hmm, Elphaba does nto fall for the visions explanation? That's to sad, even though I am not realy suprised...

*sigh* so Elphie is in the magic class now and dreams of woking with the wizard... and all...
darn! - well, it had to happen somewhen.
Glinda's visions explanation is probably the best thing she could come up with. - Not super imaginative, but it will cover for a lot of things and possible slip-ups.
nice chapter.

about future pairings (wich probably are allready in action somewhere on the allready written fic, but I still have to give my opinion):Fiyeraba it has to be, of course! Glinda loved Fiyero, but I think Fiyero and Elphaba are better for each other than Glinda and Fiyero ever would be (even if it would not come to a love triangle)
Gloq or Bessa, though? Well, it mostly depends on Boq, doesn't it? ... For him to work out happily with Nessa he would start to love her and see her as a nice person and all... and not just be with her because he first want's to impress another girl and later feels pity and a misguided sense of duty.
And for him and Glinda to work out? Well, first he has to stop to put her on a pedestal and see her as a normal girl (although a time traveling one, as it is...) . He has to start to love her for what she actually is and not for how he imagines her to be...