I read this like about a million times, but it seems like it gets more beautiful everytime I read it. It's very creative and beautiful. And I really love how you explore a full loving relationship with ups and downs.

How cute.

Very good...loved it loved it.

aw:)
that was cute and sweet.
i really liked it :D

-L xoxo

"He was also Coach Bolton's assistant for coaching the East High Wildcats whenever he could."

Aw, this made me smile just because sometimes I wonder if I'll still hang around my friends when I get older and start actually having to… work work. :)

"There were many swears and curses and divorce threats tossed around if he even so much as thought of touching her. But he knew she didn't mean it."

*tear* I feel like crying, that's such a sweet sentence. I remember my mom telling me how she nearly killed my dad because he kept finger-combing her hair, so this also made me laugh.

"His lips slowly crept into a smile. “Kevin Travis Danforth. I like it.”

*sniff* I do too.

I love the days-of-the-week theme. This is seriously a wonderful oneshot. And it's Chadpay. :) Yay.

~Desireé

hehe.

i loved the way you wrote this.

i loved it (:
you're a really good writer

good

I loved it. :]
It was really cute.
And yeah. Everything that's a synonym for that... whatever.
EW, HSM Ice Tour commercial. gross... :D on tv. not here. :[
But yeah, if THIS was in the movie, i'd sure watch it. :]
OH and YES! for USC film program.
Okay. Good job. Yeah. Have fun with The Story, too. :]

Oh that was so cool, how you had something special for each day.

I liked it

aw cute story!

Madi.
It's amazing.
I absolutly love it.
And I didn't know you were working on a one-shot!
Lol.
But it's great.
Love, love, love it!
Can't wait for you to update again!

Aww, this was cute! I love Chadpay :)
Catie x

Aw.

Aw, seriously, this was just... the best! I'm almost crying happy-tears because it's so cute. Very well done. And definite favourite.