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| Reviews for New In Forks |
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   Not That Unique 11/2/08 . chapter 32WOW! loved it. that was really good and i think there were only a couple of typos so well done! can't wait to read more of your stuff! x |
| obscure.identity 11/1/08 . chapter 32 sweet, i feel like a teenager again! wait still am LOL |
| Not That Unique 11/1/08 . chapter 3 i havent finished reading the story yet but..: (A/N: We all know what happened in biology so let’s skip that part ok?) omg i laughed so much..i dont even know why? maybe im a freak but whatever im excited for the rest of the story now..so far so good! x |
| dream-a-lot 10/27/08 . chapter 32 i loved it. i wouldn't mind knowing what edward and renee were talking about though... |
| Kricketts 10/26/08 . chapter 32 Great job again! |
| dream-a-lot 10/26/08 . chapter 11 i know you already finished this story and i like it so far but when you scenes from two different point of views, don't use the same adjective to describe something. for example, in Bella's POV when edward says "wait", it says something along the lines of 'i turned back unwillingly.' then, in Edward's POV when he says wait, it says something like 'she turned back unwillingly.' see what i mean? i think you did do a pretty good job of POVs though because you added their thoughts and didn't make it bare. so good job! |
| Naru17 10/19/08 . chapter 32 aw :) ...but now im curious... what did renee say to edward? :) |
| buggage 10/18/08 . chapter 32 Wow, ijust found this story, and i have to say that i loved it. i hope one day there will be a sequel. |
| Stratan 10/14/08 . chapter 1 Cool |
| cpagirl 10/13/08 . chapter 32 This story was incredible! I absolutey love it. I'm really hoping that you make a sequal, but I agree wit hyou - dont just make it because you want to, it should have a purpose. Awesome story! Christine |
| Inactivityispermanent 10/5/08 . chapter 32 really liked the story. emmett was so funny with what he did to jessica. |
| Chicki88 9/30/08 . chapter 32 You're a great writer. This story was really good. You done a great job! |
| Sweetpixiestyxz 9/20/08 . chapter 29 You're right. I don't think Bella was ever really angry at her mom, just hurt, upset, and frustrated. They both said what they were feeling and didn't hold a grudge so it works. Good chapter! |
| Sweetpixiestyxz 9/20/08 . chapter 18 This is why I love Alice! |
| Poor little rich kid 9/15/08 . chapter 32 hey, that. was. FANTASTICAL! it was gob smackingly AWESOME! ! i couldn't turn my computer off, so i ended up reading it in a day. sorry that this is my first review, but i've been too caught up in reading ;P iloveyou-er |
