i didn't no u had a another series, but i read the first two and i wanted to see what was up with old stories, i was pleasently surprised.

Wow...wow...did not see that coming, I must say. So now the entire future has changed...wow. I hope they get it right soon, but I must say, excellent plot twist! And I felt so bad for Newt and Tali. And you pulled off the change perfectly, if not disturbingly. I hope you feel well enough to update soon, that is an amazing cliff hanger. I need to know what happens! But again, excellent job :c)

That was sad :c( But its all better now! Yay!

Sorry, I TOTALLY forgot I had not finished yet. *sheepish smile* Anyway, great chapter! Yay, they were accepted! Loved the Cheeto bit :c) Veery intertaining! And how did Jake know? Oh well, to come I guess.

Great chapter it is :c) And your part you wrote before was still good! And I liked how you changed the perspective of the whole scene for this, so we still found out more than just repetition of the last story. And I love Zac and his POV! Its just so much fun! And now the new stuff begins! Though Ill have to read that later. Again, great job!

I would leave a nice, long-winded review praising your greatness, but Im tired, so you are just gonna have to settle with this. Awesome chapter! Cant wait to read more! Yay Aris dead again!

I think Im gonna have to agree with Katie on this one, there is no such thing as pointless Jali! But yay they kissed! And yay theyre together! Bad Gazzy! But I can understand his feelings, poor guy. Anywho, great job! And now its on to Hybrids, and then finnish catching up on this!

Loved the beginning part where they finally decided to b a band and had Tali and Jake do their sing/play thing :c) And I loved Jakes "motormouth"ing, and his thoughts :cP And the wedding bit was awesome to, flawlessly changing it to their point of view. Aww, Jake loves her so much. So cute :c) Great job Bre. Ill read more tomorrow, I aint feeling so hot tonight.

yea you updated it! i love the twist who woulda thought they'd screw up? anyway i should post our story tonight! yea! keep up the good work my clone and ttyl!

wow, I wasn't expecting that... continue it!

...There was a problem I had with this. A nagging, evil problem. Max seems like an egoistic brat with the way she caused a huge rift like that over something so trivial. At least that's what I think.

i love you bre!
im in the story! if you hadnt putn this up today, i couldnt have readit!
camrina x

Oh! That was awesome! And I can't wait for the next chapter! They'll all be in the same room explaining, talking or whatever :oD Hehehehehehe. Fun! ..yeah, I've just had my lunch and I'm a little hyper cause I had mash potatoes (I know, weird).

I don't think it was a bad ending (Not word wise, but evil, making us all wait wise, it was nasty :oP). It actually left a good place for you to start your next chapter.

Like I said in one of our e-mails, I felt really sorry for Tali and Newt when they were crying (so you MUST be a good writer if I felt sorry for HIM! :oP). And you did Jake, Syd, Shell, and Zak/Reid's reactions really well. But one thing, Zak's emo? :o( Poor little guy! Make him back to normal soon! You hear me Bre? I don't want that little guy to be emo! :o(

Please do more soon! Usually I wouldn't mind, if you were going to do another of your stories, or more of Hybrid's, but the ending was just to good to make us all wait!

-Katie

Yay! Good, long chap! Bringing in elements from Free Rina excellently blended. Jali fun. Jeb not so much. It was good, but I just dont trust him (surprise surprise) Katie and James well portrayed, and it seemed like a lot of fun. That mouth of Zaks is gonna get him in a lot of trouble :c)

Caving was awesome! :cD Just had to say it.

What do you mean "kiss was crappy"? Kiss was good! Jali good! Your writing good! You did a great job all around! And interaction between Tali and Rina good! (almost forgot about that :cP)

Would read more but Im going caving tomorrow and need sleep! Great job again!