 Veditha Dmitriev 4/11/11 . chapter 1Haha. Cool! I fave this! |
 NaaraHatake 8/20/10 . chapter 1awesome |
 Secret Sheik 5/2/10 . chapter 1Hm, not bad! My only constructive criticism though... well, you used a few too many modern world cultural references, like opening a can of whoop-ass. :P It's not really something they would be aware of. Stick to the feel of the times if possible, and try not to overuse the commas. :D
But, also, hawt. XD |
 xxxLucifers-Angelxxx 9/15/09 . chapter 1*WOW* Simply AWESOME! |
 Romancelover1321 3/27/09 . chapter 1Way to go. Good job. |
 SolLaDama 8/17/08 . chapter 1Yayy! This was so sweet and sexy! |
 Jaddasroots 6/18/08 . chapter 1that was nice... |
 Sabeke 4/19/08 . chapter 1loved your story :) it's really good :D |
 animefan28 3/27/08 . chapter 1hmm have i reviewed this story before? well if i have then this won't go through lol anyways I really like this one shot, its great! Nice work! :) |
 Raeyl 2/14/08 . chapter 1They waited a SHORT time, just cus their nin doesn't mean they shouldn't wait ABIT longer for round two! |
 kira-chan's imagination 1/9/08 . chapter 1aww, i love this one. its the best ] the ending fits so well |
 blackmarble 11/1/07 . chapter 1"...animated man..." Kakashi? Animated? o.O Okay. Amusing story though. Kakashi's stalker tendencies are always funny to read about. |
 Kenners 10/19/07 . chapter 1i really liked that one, made me want to call my boyfriend haha! Thanks for writting! |
 Broken Mantra 10/18/07 . chapter 1This was really good!
i would just say read over it a time or two before you post, you might find better words to use in context. It's helped me out.
But seriously, this was a great Kaku/Saku fic.
golf claps for you! |
 HunniBunni429 10/16/07 . chapter 1*nose bleed* but in a good way
thats was super hott
great job! |