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Veditha Dmitriev 4/11/11 . chapter 1
Haha. Cool! I fave this!
NaaraHatake 8/20/10 . chapter 1
awesome
Secret Sheik 5/2/10 . chapter 1
Hm, not bad! My only constructive criticism though... well, you used a few too many modern world cultural references, like opening a can of whoop-ass. :P It's not really something they would be aware of. Stick to the feel of the times if possible, and try not to overuse the commas. :D

But, also, hawt. XD
xxxLucifers-Angelxxx 9/15/09 . chapter 1
*WOW* Simply AWESOME!
Romancelover1321 3/27/09 . chapter 1
Way to go. Good job.
SolLaDama 8/17/08 . chapter 1
Yayy! This was so sweet and sexy!
Jaddasroots 6/18/08 . chapter 1
that was nice...
Sabeke 4/19/08 . chapter 1
loved your story :) it's really good :D
animefan28 3/27/08 . chapter 1
hmm have i reviewed this story before? well if i have then this won't go through lol anyways I really like this one shot, its great! Nice work! :)
Raeyl 2/14/08 . chapter 1
They waited a SHORT time, just cus their nin doesn't mean they shouldn't wait ABIT longer for round two!
kira-chan's imagination 1/9/08 . chapter 1
aww, i love this one. its the best ] the ending fits so well
blackmarble 11/1/07 . chapter 1
"...animated man..." Kakashi? Animated? o.O Okay. Amusing story though. Kakashi's stalker tendencies are always funny to read about.
Kenners 10/19/07 . chapter 1
i really liked that one, made me want to call my boyfriend haha! Thanks for writting!
Broken Mantra 10/18/07 . chapter 1
This was really good!

i would just say read over it a time or two before you post, you might find better words to use in context. It's helped me out.

But seriously, this was a great Kaku/Saku fic.

golf claps for you!
HunniBunni429 10/16/07 . chapter 1
*nose bleed* but in a good way

thats was super hott

great job!
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