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Reviews For: An Unreasonable Desire to Live

Unknown Fool
2007-11-17
ch 1,
abuseReally . . . amazing job.

You write so beautiful, and this story is a real gem. You really plant us firmly into Saix's mind,and we can feel his anger pooling on our tounge and clawing up our veins . . . the characterzation was phenominal, and the hints of XemSai were a dream. Thank you so much for writing this.
Lady Nightmare
2007-10-07
ch 1,
abuseZOMG Vagrant Story.
Oni-Gil
2007-10-06
ch 1,
abuseW-Wow. -jawdrop- I... just... really can't think of anything to say!
LittleBrick
2007-10-03
ch 1,
abuseloved it! loved everyone in this story, especially xemnas, he seems so real when you write him...this is going to favs of course.

peachy:P
The Light's Refrain
2007-10-02
ch 1,
abuseAwesome work as always.

Heh, I loved the part where Saic thinks about how Vexen spells "magick" wrong, and is trying to make him spell it wrong too XD. It's also interesting seeing how Saix classifies Vexen and Zexion as "clerics" and Laexeus, Xaldin, and Xigbar as "knights". And you write Xemnas brilliantly, espeically in the scene with the pens and paper clips.

Cya!
nupinoop296
2007-10-02
ch 1,
abuseI really hate Saix, but I liked this.
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