Eh, not as good as your other Heroes stories. (If you can't tell, I'm basically running through your stories tonight.) On the other hand, I've never liked Mohinder much, though I'll admit he's very good looking. I just can't get past his personality.

beautiful and very sad.
short but perfect the way it is.
thank you.

That was so sad, but so beautiful. I loved it! *thumbs up*

Very good writing, write more Mylar because you do it quite well!

Very interesting. I want to know what's going to happen next and when sylar is going to appear into Mohinder's life again.

Oh wow, that was one of those great fics were I got kind of teary eyed and my heart ached afterwards *is a sap* - oh I bit how I love good angst and esp. good Mylar angst (it doesn't get much better then that)! and this, this was something special. You really captured the tension and the mood - really, it had a very surreal, dream like quality that was really lovely.

~ beautiful job with this!