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| xXOcean-BabeXx 2008-07-09 ch 1,  | abuseit was too late... wow, it was pretty dramatic. i almost cried...words rarely make a person cry...wow |
| Bundibird 2008-04-03 ch 1, | abuseDude, that was awesome! I loved it! You almost made me cry though with the bit about Eragon almost feeling as though he was flying again with his closest friends by his side. That was so SAD! I was like "No!!" when i realised saphira had died. That was really, really good. Great spelling and grammar too. :) Keep up the great work. :) Bundibird |
| Lord Cornelius Ravencroft 2008-02-21 ch 1, | abuseThis story is sad but intresting point of veiw. Signed The Grim Reader |
| Blue-Eyed Chica 2007-10-12 ch 1, | abuseAW THATS SO SAD! (aka its good) |
| Fallen Dragonfly 2007-10-03 ch 1, | abuseIt didn't suck, it was a brilliant first fic. And don't you dare say it's only a oneshot. You've given me an idea for my fic actually. |
| FireDragon218 2007-10-03 ch 1, | abuseOh I love it! DIE ARYA DIE! ...sry...hehe.. I don't really like Arya and Eragon being together.. Don't really like Arya at all but I LOVED your story. It was written well and you had both in perfect character. Firedragon218 |
| Given-Inside 2007-10-03 ch 1, | abuseGood and believable. Nice work. You brought in detail, but not too much to ruin the story. Kudos, Yours, G.I |
| fAteD lOvE 2007-10-03 ch 1, | abuseBrilliantly written, although a happy ending would have been nice ;-) |
| First Gurl Rider 2007-10-02 ch 1, | abuseGood story. Please add more. I loved it. Totally! sorry, im just a little hyper, or a lot. |
| Link's Ocarina Babe 2007-10-02 ch 1, | abuseWhoa... That is the most heart-wrenching one I've read in a long time. I am a big fan of the Inheritance series, and I'm curious to know if Saphira really dies in the third book, or is this straight from your mind? |
| ivystartwins 2007-10-02 ch 1, | abuseaw, graet plot well of what i have read so far geat. youve got the emotions rigth and i can tell the same old eragon there he still and arrogant jerk just more of it this time. anyway i praise you on this chapter snowdragon1911 |